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I Forgive You

 

Forgiveness Comes With A Price

 

 

The skies were bright and cheerful. The sun shone through the clouds magnificently pouring its ray across the endless spread of land and into every rising concrete’s windows dancing on the surface of Taemin’s flawless skin, gradually warming him up. He glared at the bright spots the sun was shining onto his arm and face before pulling the curtains to shield his body from it. The beautiful weather was annoying him. He wanted nothing more than to destroy the sun with a nuclear power ten times bigger than the sun’s destructive energy. He would, if he could, turn this obnoxious world into a land of darkness and fear. There is nothing more that he would like to do besides making the world understand his endless suffering. And the only way they could begin to comprehend would be to rid off all their emotions and plunge them all into a dark empty tunnel filled with coldness. He would blind every man’s eyes and tear out their bleeding fresh hearts. Only by doing this could they put themselves in Taemin’s shoes and see the world from his eyes. But it was obvious to see that no selfish human would do this. None.

Taemin knew of this and so he will have to force the world to see his pain from his point of view. He will make them suffer the way he had suffered. And what better way to start than with the sole person that had caused the destruction of his perfect family?

Watch out, Jessica. Your number is up…

Pray that you’re lucky enough so that Taemin wouldn’t be too blinded with his own grief to see the one cure for him.

Choi Minho, the man that will stand by him forever.

 

 

 

author's note

I have posted the story with this preview in it!

I'll write the chapter as soon as I can get time on my hands~

here's the link if you're interested:   http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/66485

 

 

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DzaifiyaChoHee
#1
Chapter 2: you have no idea how much you made me cry... but.. I love you author-nim for such a beautiful story ...
Evil_angelELF #2
Chapter 3: I cried until my father asked me why am I crying -.- soo sad T^T
Alanamay6 #3
Chapter 2: you don't know how much I cried!! T.T ㅠ.ㅠ ㅍ,ㅍ So good, but so sad! :( Great FRICKING job! My pillow is like soaked in tears xD I really enjoyed it! But it's sad how that is the end..oh no, I'm gonna cry again..;_;
lorymimi #4
tis is awesome ^^ i cried thou........... T^T it was sad!
taeyeonlover #5
That was very good for a first review. U got 73 out of 100. Congrats!
SHINee_fangirl_4ever
#6
such a beautiful story~~~ <br />
curiousity #7
This is purely beautiful. I cried again...<br />
love your stories mroe plz xx
starpaints #8
This is so beautiful, I swear! And it's too bad that Key died ;__;<br />
Btw, can you make please make a sequel for this? But uhm... about the 2min ofc. I was wondering what Taemin meant by dating. I mean, is he dating a girl or Minho? :) Anyway, I really love this fanfic and its prequel. It simply is beautiful :)
taeyeonlover #9
AHHHHHH! ur so good in making ur readers cry :'( i can't stop myslf. my nose n ears r blocked nw T.T<br />
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both the chapters were awesome^^ sory to say bt i didn't get any flaws in here too n i feel this one is better...i mean more awesome >.< yah heck i don't hv a correct word.<br />
The letter n taemin's last words left me crying like a baby :'( lol ur so good in writing sad stories :D
agito_kanon9 #10
i don't cry while reading angsty stories but this is one heck of a story! semapi can i call you that? your so good at making angst genre stories. *cries* can't stop crying.