Hazel is not sure whether she should confess her feelings to Kris or not. She is afraid that he will reject her just like the other four guys she confessed to. WIll she be successful in the end or will she get rejected AGAIN?
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Chapter 1: IT WAS BEAUTIFUL!! KYAAAAA~! I swear you make the best stories! You give so much thought in to what you're writing that it makes me jealous~ But yeah there are still a couple of things. Haha xD Well, I understood that you re-read it, but I guess you already memorized the story in your head that you didn't look at every detail. Suho's name changed to Yunho, Kris' name would change to Jaejoong, and again Hazel's name would also change to Karen. There were times when Kris was talking in present tense, but then some of his words would change to past tense. There were times when the narrator was talking in past tense, but then would suddenly change to present tense. Kind of confusing, but I still understand what you're trying to say. My opinion is, go look for a reader, a person you trust, to read it and edit some of the mistakes you made. Still, overall, it was truly amazing. Good job!
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