Chapter 1: This is really good. It's touching and simple. I like it because it's like a poem and there's not a lot of Chinese stories on AFF. The end is saddening yet bitterweet. Well done, author-nim :D.
Chapter 1: Wah~ //claps, claps// Nice writing~ I love it~ But I think it's more of a poem..Tho, I wonder why did they broke up? How did they broke or fell apart? And I noticed there's a little bit mistake, I think??? One word, I think? I think that word was wrong spelled or I was just imagining and making confusing views. I'm really sleepy because of this day. Aish. So tired. So what's your ethnicity??? Are you a half chinese or you just learned it?
And I was grinning widely when I saw it in chinese! Mandarin, mandarin♥ Awe, it's rare here to see some like these because really, authors write and type with english language for our different ethnic readers~ Glad, I can talk with you in chinese! Good luck, Fighting, and Good job~ =D ♥♥♥
Chapter 1: This is wonderful! <3 oh, and i see your bias is Kris too! Haha! Fortunately for me, i speak all four languages that Kris does as well XD Korean, english, cantonese and chinese! Hwaiting to you! Learning two new languages is difficult and challenging! I'm a kris bias as well! HWAITING! Oh, and continue writing these fics! <3
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