The Lost Sense

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The Lost Sense; Byun Baekhyun  & Park Chanyeol

There are millions of flowers in the world, and so does the number of the people. Each varies in colors, and each varies in personalities. Some may be perfect, and some may have something unique within them. The human race tend to think differences are disabilities, labeling them as people who lacks capacity of doing what a normal person does. But the truth doesn't really rely on that thought, because a person of difference can do what a normal person does; can smile, can laugh, can cry, and importantly, can love.

 

Byun Baekhyun, has never pictured himself different. But a small fear glearing inside him made him think that if he'll be ever having the chance to be loved. As he was hopeless, his mind makes him remember that there is someone special, whom was Park Chanyeol, who ought his life to be his love. In every distance, every space between their fingers lies sorrows and pain, but love will always conquer. Through hard ships and pain, and tears and loss, their story shows how love remains a complete puzzle even if a certain piece is missing.

 

Foreword

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chanbaekghei #1
Chapter 5: I read this before and reread it again. Thank you for this.
kpoplovershines14 #2
Thank you for making me cey every time I read this story. Awwwwwww it was so sad;( very well written though especially the prologue . <3
eldoradoe #3
Chapter 5: OMG I cried ! It's so sad T.T

why Chanyeol, why ? You promised Luhan hmmmm and you left poor Baekhyun..!
This is so sad.. *ugly sobs* I love you author-nim ^^
imSoocute #4
Chapter 5: This is so beautifully written T^T I'm a sobbing mess at the end. Chanyeol wae? waeyo? T^T
Hydrangeas #5
...I have been reading a few lines from you, even your 'Unwrapped' from LiveJournal was witty and beautiful!'♥ SO I WILL BE LISTING SOME GREATNESS FROM THIS STORY WHILE I SOB ALL THE WAY BECAUSE THIS IS *P*E*R*F*E*C*T !!! #


"Baekhyun’s nostrils contracted and his upper lip flinched, fingers drew a cross at the veneer he was leaning on. He listened to a few steps from the person, his hearing detailed at each friction it makes with the floor."

- I could perfectly picture this moment ITS SO REALISTIC and the telephatic-styled movement is PURELY COOOOL; no doubt >:D

"It was a moment before Chanyeol finally noticed that Baekhyun’s hand was already erected in front of him. He gasps and quickly reached for it for a shake. Their skin made contact, and the lines like Yellow Park canyons on their palms filled up each other. The feeling was so electrifying, Chanyeol couldn’t add a second longer. He withdrew his hand and held Baekhyun by the wrist instead, and gently placed back his hand back to his side."

- Very basic and neat moment when the character get stunned by an unexpected appearance of his beautiful admiration. This was really sweet and proper, the detail 'the lines like Yellow Park canyons' was relatable. WONDAFUULL ^♥^

"“Baekhyun is blind—”

The sound of calamity and machines clanking, roads and wheels scratching and smoke heavily breathing distracted the city’s rounded sleep. Everything seemed so vast, yet so occupied. The pace of life was harsh and fast, like turning on a fire to its extremity, burning you into ashes in seconds."

- the sequence between Suho's revelation and the music of the city was really cinematic! I imagined the scene immediately, like someone worded out a secret, then a sudden noise of a loud traffic dramatically covers the echoes of his voice... that thick connection between shock and disturbance was flawless OMG OMG *yyyy*
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