Ayo, Aftersnsd!
B&D • Best for the Best
TITLE: I’ll Always Be Here
STATUS: ONGOING
SYNOPSIS: 6.5/10
The synopsis is the most important asset in drawing the potential reader’s attention. Even if the story is spectacular, it would be meaningless if the synopsis doesn’t intrigue the reader. I wasn’t impressed as it was one that seemed mediocre. Luckily, it was enough to make me to give it a try.
ORIGINALITY: 8.5/10
There are cliche scenes but the author does a good job in creating a few twists. Some scenes are predictable but most are an interesting new experience. The author provides a few original characters. Though not too many to take away the enjoyment of the main characters.
GRAMMAR/LANGUAGE: 9/10
Great use of vocabulary and word choice. The choice of diction is for the most part, phenominal. Hardly any grammar incorrections spotted and correct use of language.
FLOW/STYLE: 9/10
General flow if story is slow but fluid. Hardly any rough patches or unneeded scenes. Style is as if a college student or a person with high knowledge of the english language.
ENJOYABILITY: 8.5/10
This story is overall a very good piece to read with very few slow and boring scenes. Though a bit tempting to fast forward a bit, it is not recommended as every scene contains key details for the future. Author also does a great job in incorporating the personality and the characteristics of the idols.
OVERALL: 41.5/50
COMMENTS:
I, personally, don’t subscribe to many stories since I loose interest very fast or the style is very hard to read through, but I am subscribed to this story. I also get excited when I see it updated. I was skeptical about this story but I was plesantly surprised. I highly recommend this story if you are a Hyosica fan or SNSD fan in general. I even upvoted this story which is one of only eight.
Though I am a hardcore Hyosica shipper and a Hyosica writer as well, these facts do not influence the grading of this story.
Reviewed on 1.6.14
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