Baekhyun [The Marriage life of Mr Byun]

Reviews and Recommendations

The Marriage life of Mr Byun
Ongoing 

Reasons why you should read it?
- Well written.
- Story progresses at a solid pace.
- Although its a lot of fluff, there is this innate sense of realism about it all.
- Character traits are consistent.
- This story ventures beyond them getting together. It shows the conflicts that the characters go through, how they are resolved.
- My favourite story on AFF.
- Side romances.
- Very emotional. You will laugh out loud, want to pull the hair out of your head and punch Baekhyun in the face then hug him for being perfect. 
- Banter. It takes a lot of skill to write funny and witty banter and the author nails it.

Potential Issues

- The story could be seen as repetitive by some because of the fact that get together so early on. Plus Baekhyun's relationship issues which the writer emphasises and follows through consistently. I believe it makes the story realisitc, but others might find it frustrating.
- The female protagnist becomes slightly annoying when she interacts with Luhan.

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pk1019
#1
Chapter 3: Omg I’ve been looking for these forever!! I love the one about Chen
kachinggu
#2
Chapter 1: You should try reading into my world, into my world by melodyandcrosses :)
Seobiee123 #3
Chapter 9: I would say XOXO is the best AFF i have ever read thus far. There's a sequel to XOXO!
xWafflebunnii
#4
It'd be really helpful if you could review my first two chapters of my first story. Just 2 chapters: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/683670/my-fated-destiny-to-be-with-you-angst-romance-originalcharacter-exo-chanyeol
Chocolato #5
are you able to recommend me some really good enjoyable reads of Kris or Luhan ? :)
4lifeMister #6
Hey there! I am looking for some harsh criticism for my fanfic "See If I Care" and it is Exo-OC centered and even though it is not Rated M it is more of a Teen-rating fic since eventually it will get progressively angsty. I would love it if you checked it out and maybe gave me your opinion on it but I understand if you don't have the time nor want to. If you do wanna then here's the link :)
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/527113/see-if-i-care-angst-you-exo-luhan-sehun-kris-suho