After Love (Sequel to Love in Vain)
Description
Same bed but it feels just a little bit bigger now
Our song on the radio but it doesn't sound the same
When our friends talk about you, all it does is just tear me down
Cause my heart breaks a little when I hear your name - Bruno Mars When I was Your Man
Seongyeol used to love playing game.
But one thing he didn't know; it was the end for him and Gyuri.
If only he knew it....
"I should have treated you better"
If you haven't read the first part you might be confused with the one shot here. So I suggested you to read the Gyuri part first. ^^
Love in Vain
Foreword
Well here's my first promised to Love in Vain reader. *about the second one I'm still thinking about it. kekeke"
This is a sequel you want. I don't know if this can fill up your expectation or not. kekeke because I'm not used to write sequel. Usually sequel never been interesting. *ups*.
But I tried hard to open up what Seongyeol had in mind. ^^
Actually I have one confession. kekeke. These two one shots are inspired by two songs. kekeke.
I usually write one shot with a song mood. It's pretty easy to find out what inspired its story.
Can you guess it?
You can try to read this fic along with listening to the song. ^^ It would help to cope the feeling.
And one last more, kekeke too many foreword. fiuh.. this is my first time doing poster kekeke... actually it's my first time doing something like this with photoshop. How is it?
I think it turned out better than my expectation, I ever tried it about 4-5 years ago and it's really awfull. kkk.
*please don't say it's really awful. hahaha*
Total 74/100
Title (5/5)
Appearence (3/5)
Foreword & Description (10/15)
Characters (12/15)
Plot (15/20)
Flow (8/10)
Language (14/20)
Enjoyment (7/10)
FULL REVIEW by NEON™ Reviews [OPEN]
Thank you for giving me some advice for better performance. ^^
M
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