Hearts Delight Review Shop

Description

Thank you for visiting my review shop. I'm really looking forward to offering some constructive advice for how to improve your story. I will review anything, but unfortunately I am only able to review stories in English and possibly French (Mon Française c'est ne pas trop mal. Si vous désirez un review dans francaise, mais mon compréhension de la grammaire est certainement déplorable. Je vais vous dire si je ne pense pas que je peux review votre histoire.) 

I am very honest,  but I am not a cruel reviewer. I am doing this to help you so I won't say anything that I don't feel would be constructive and help you to write a better story in the future. 

 

How to be reviewed by me:

1. Click subscribe 

2. Fill out the request form, posting it in the comments.

3. wait patiently until the review for your story is posted.

 

Rubric:

Title and Description - /15

I will review your title and description, noting spelling and grammatical errors as well as commenting on whether they drew me into the story.

Plot - /20

Here I will give you a good idea of whether I felt that your plot was believable and enjoyable.

Characters - /20

I will comment constructively on how you developed your characters.

Pace and Flow - /15

Did your characters who hate each other suddenly fall madly in love? That's not going to work and here I will tell you why.

Grammar, Spelling and Structure - /15

If this isn't self explanatory then you really need my help.

Overall enjoyability - /15

I not only add my rating for how enjoyable the story was, but also mention which parts (if any) lost my interest.

 
Application:
 
Please fill this out and paste it in the comments:
 
Story title:
 
Link to Story:
 
Is English your first Language?
 
Would you like me to go easy on you?
 
 
 

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AnnieWilson
#1
Story title: Survivor

Link to Story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/847914/survivor-angst-apocalypse-horror-shinee-exo-bap-got7

Is English your first Language? Yes

Would you like me to go easy on you? No

P.S. I only have two chapters so far so I was wondering if maybe I could get a review after I've done five chapters? :) I'm currently writing the fourth one (third is in draft)
angelato
#2
Hi, my story was originally 'Our Secret' but I've now changed the title to 'c e l o'
Thisismyusernamekay
#3
Story title:
Falling to Pieces


Link to Story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/584712/falling-to-pieces-angst-drama-eunhae-romance--hyukhae



Is English your first Language?
Yes


Would you like me to go easy on you?
Not really.
invisible_girl
#4
Story title: Get Out of My Eyes

Link to Story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/531402/get-out-of-my-eyes-lovestory-romance-you-exo-sehun


Is English your first Language? No

Would you like me to go easy on you? - Please be objective
angelato
#5
Story title: OUr Secret

Link to Story: www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/575105/our-secret-dark-you-exo-exok-baekhyun-contestentry

Is English your first Language? Yes

Would you like me to go easy on you? No, come at me.
foxybunny13
#6
Story title: A Song of Hearts

Link to Story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/589212

Is English your first Language? Nope.

Would you like me to go easy on you?
Anything that can help me improve. :)
Nictaeny9
#7
Story title: Dark Ties

Link to Story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/543164/dark-ties-dark-romance-snsd-taeny-taeyeon-tiffany-yuri

Is English your first Language?: yes

Would you like me to go easy on you?: constructive criticism would be fine!
invisible_girl
#8
Chapter 3: Thanks for your review. It gave me food for thought. Ok, I'm going to correct mistakes and make it more readable. :)