Wake Up

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Pairing: Kailu/Lukai

Genre: Angst, tragedy
Wordcount: 3,600
Warning: Character death

 

SUMMARY: 
"It’s hard to put every “thank you for the memories” and “sorry for the times I hurt you” into one, single goodbye, but Jongin realizes that in the end, it’s only three words that really matter." 

Jongin wakes up with Luhan every day, but he can't escape his dreams, and reality is still waiting for him to come back. 

Foreword

I never thought I would actually finish this. It's something I've been working on since the beginning of summer, but then I've been so unsure what to do with this story, and how to continue it, and how to put everything I've always wanted to write into words, turning them into a not-crappy story that someone would actually want to read. I've always wanted to try to write angst, so this the result I guess. Honestly, my writing is quite inconsistent, so this is really more for the plot and emotional battles than me being a good writer lol because if we're gonna compare it to some of the amazing fanfic writers in this fandom, then wow, my writing is crappy. 

This isn't really betaed either, so please forgive me for the horrible grammar and spelling errors that I'm pretty positive you'll come across when reading this. If anyone would be willing to beta this, and maybe just rant with me so I can blow off some steam, please DO :) I'd love to talk. 

 

And leave a comment and tell me what you thought? It would absolutely make my day :)

(THIS STORY IS NOW AVAILABLE ON MY LIVEJOURNAL)

http://mbnn11.livejournal.com/1163.html

SPANISH TRANSLATION: 

http://beagle-line.livejournal.com/1174.html

 

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asphodelblossoms #1
I guess it's good that Lu Han got to say goodbye somehow. But it still huuuurts. :(
dhyunnasworld #2
Chapter 1: I was crying after reading this
maybe that was happen to my boyfriend when he's on coma for over 1 month... he lost he's brother because of that accident
and now... he refused to believe that he's brother is gone
he still telling me to go and fetch his brother on his school or he will say "Let's go home, my brother must be lonely without me and my parents there"
I just want to cry, I want him to give up the fate and accept the truth
it's already 7 months after that accident but he's never change
and I can't leave him alone
my friends told that he's going crazy
but I know him better than anyone else, he just love his brother so much
even though he love to make a fun with his brother, I can tell that's how he showing him his love

thanks for writing such a beautiful yet painful story like this
now I really understand my boyfriend
I won't leaving him alone, never

I will love his brother as much as he do, so I can feels the same pain as him
and that's make me want to help him to be happy again with or without his brother

thanks a lot
kikicarolinajung #3
Chapter 1: im ashamed of my self bcs i just get to read this by now.
i love you so much, i just get to watch their concert yesterday and all my feels didnt disappear n i just need some kailu's story to comfort me.
idk is it just me or kailu really suited with this kind of genre (angst, tragedy, n yada yada)
the part when luhan told jongin he has been selfish and all is my
im so done with this, im crying myself to sleep and thank you sobs <3
unicupcakes #4
Chapter 1: I KNEW IT GOSH BUT IM STILL CRYING;;;;;;;
mrslukai #5
Chapter 1: reading this again and im crying just as much as the first time I read it. this is absolutely one of my favorite one shots.
I have no words to express how I feel right now.
you are amazing.
pandapandaaa #6
Chapter 1: "I didn’t want to wake up. I was having a much better time asleep. And that’s really sad. It was almost like a reverse nightmare, like when you wake up from a nightmare you’re so relieved. I woke up into a nightmare."

this quote fits the story so much
AliceMoon #7
Chapter 1: Why I only found this now? T^T
It's really heartbreaking! Oh god...I keep holding my tears from falls because I'm in class right now! Damn! Why is this happening to me!!? I want to cry!
-It's a really brilliant work's author! I meant it-
honeybees #8
Chapter 1: OMG i did not just cry T__________T it's so sad noooo luhan why :(

good jod authornim!! i enjoyed it tho it's heartbreaking..
-Agata #9
Chapter 1: Omg Lulu :'(
MaryLea #10
Chapter 1: Omg I'm crying my soul out!!
I love it!! T^T
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