Chapter 1: Aww Channie get yourself a nice drink after all that. I remember learning how to drive, my mom was not the best teacher, despite being a great driver. But I really got the best lessons from my big sister and her husband. This was super cute. Kudos

Chapter 1: HAHAHA Jongup driving is so fun.. hehehe I really hope that a kiss happen during the driving session

Chapter 1: "stale green" - I never heard that before, but I like it.
This was a bit run-on: "No buts we're almost there." It would be better as: "No buts! We're almost there."

But overall it was very well-written. I can tell you're not one of those who came here with no previous experience in writing. And the English and grammar are good, too. It appears you read books. Keep it up.

Chapter 1: SO FUNNY! I can restain myself from smiling XD
Jongup was just tooooooooo adorable! Kyaaa

Chapter 1: waahhh, kyeoptaa!!! :)

Chapter 1: Ahaha, this is too funny! Haha, it's a cute story:)
Himchan teaching the rest to drive is the best! ❤

Chapter 1: Looooooool himchan will die from his stress !! XD

Chapter 1: Omfg XD this is totally going to be me in two years. But omg Himchan teaching the members how to drive, priceless XD

Chapter 1: HAHAHAHHHAH!!! Oh yeah this was awesome! I laughed through the whole thing!

Chapter 1: Dear God, I haven't laughed this hard in a LONG time. I am 48 years old and the youngest of 6. I remember my parents teaching all of us how to drive.. OMG.. I can so relate... lol I also learned how to drive city and school buses and THOSE were some harrowing rides let me tell you.. (no it wasn't me driving lol )