Loving Care

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It's tragic, but Suzy's mission in the afterlife is to find her beloved Myungsoo a wife. Too bad that he is the only one not on board with the plan.

 

Foreword

“She is not the girl for you.”

I sigh, running a hand though my hair.

 Suzy was right, of course. She was not the right girl for me – I can’t stand the rich, shallow women my aunt makes me go in blind dates with.

“Maybe there isn’t anyone on Earth that can be my other half - only you.”

Suzy laughs out loud, showing her dimples and slowing to keep pace with me, “I guarantee you that the right person for you is out there, Myungsoo Oppa. I will personally find her for you. Also, it would be very weird if we stayed together, after all I am dead.”

 

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This fic has joined The Heroine of Love - A Writing Semi - contest.

And WON first place!  YAY! (ノ≧∀≦)ノ

Thanks for all the support ^-^v .

The Prompts used were:

1. The music Touch Love by Yoon Mi Rae

"It's okay even if I can't touch you

It's okay even if I can't hug you

Lonely love, Yes - I love you,

Like my destiny

I can feel you"

 

2. The quote by Francesca Lia Block:

"I stand here waiting to disappear or sing"

 

This fanfic has joined Karma's Third Writing Contest! Please cheer for me ^^!

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Once more I have to thanks my dear friend and consultant in all things K-pop: callmephantom (who is also my beta for this fic and the one who did this awesome poster). Thanks! 

Also, it might be noted that she is the reason this fic even exist, because she was the one who asked me to write a myungszy fic in the first place. I hope to have succeed in honoring your request!

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Fan_of_Karma
#1
Chapter 1: This is really sad... I mean, I know how Suzy must have felt, wanting her beloved to be loved again, but at the same time, it was kind of selfish of her to force a romance onto Myungsoo. The ending is really fitting; I was really surprised by the last couple of paragraphs! :)
Iana17 #2
Chapter 1: I really love your writing, and although I was sad for Eun Joo, I am always going to be even more sad for Suzy, because she loved him even though she knew he would be better off with another woman and he loved her even though he ended being happy with Eun Joo. I suppose that only proves that love doesn't really follows whats most logical or best, but what it wants to follow. Thank you for showing us another one of the worlds you think :)
smtalliance
#3
This is one of the best stories I have ever read on this site.
Keep writing stories like this.
Thank you.
zephyrine
#4
Just for you know, I was sobbing like a broken hearted girl after reading this story. Beautiful, cute, and the ending is just heartbreaking yet suitable.
Thanks for sharing with me ^^
insecurefeels #5
Chapter 1: I love this... But still it is so sad :(
msangelhearts
#6
Chapter 1: Oh my gosh! I cried alot because of this fic..it was so beautiful than I ever thought.. i really love the last line -- "i love Eun Joo a plenty, but I will always love Suzy more.." and my tears started to fall again when I read the last line -- "and i will never stop hoping that she appears to meagain.

But, she never does." :'(
infinite7myungsooL
#7
Chapter 1: God...I love the last paragraph :' it so sad...
xdreammerx
#8
Chapter 1: It's pretty cool that this fic isn't just "love" or "don't love" but also the in-betweens and the extent of it. I can feel Myungsoo's dilemma ;_; Such a pity that he couldn't live with Suzy, yet sometimes life is like that. That subtle bitterness at the end aww ><
emoemon #9
Chapter 1: best...i cried heavily..