Once Again, Fall Deeply in You

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Choi Seung Hyun. That name brings trauma to me.

He makes me fall in love with him.

He breaks me into pieces.

Then, he makes me fall in love again.

I scared to see the ending of this love.

I want to tell him i missed him, but i can't.

I want to end this love, but i'd rather hurt than losing him again.

Choi Seung Hyun, My trauma, My addict.

Foreword

This is my first fanfic >o< my english is not that good, so if i make a mistake, feel free to comment me ^^

I write this fanfic based on my own inspiration. :)

My unnie motivate me to write a sweet story about TOP, so i make it now. ^^

Please leave some comment if you like my fanfic ^^ and for subscriber and reader, thanks for subscribe and reading ^^

Thanks a lot! >o<

Happy reading >o< hope you like it.

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unpretty1004 #1
Chapter 8: Too short story i would be more if you added mo re chaoter btw i really love you story hoping taht you more top fanfics^^
jess11041102 #2
Thanks for my readers, i receive any critize comment. please feel free to give your comment. this is my first fanfic ever, and i need your comment so i can make some progress next time ^^ please looking forward for my new story ><
THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!
DustLoveTOP #3
Chapter 8: Continue lower comment.


At least I can see how much she loves SeungHyun, it's very pure and true but it's lack passionate, if they want to get marry and live with each other for the rest of life then there's no way they can end like this, they have to challenge their love for themselves, love can't b like "i luv u" or "u're so beautiful and i want to have u for mdy life" it needs to be proved.

Hmm Unnie so sorry jess but i really like the beginning, but the rest is lacking and i need more of u, i will look forward for ur next fic: )))

Thank u for writing this fic jess amd if u feel sad just delete my comment: )
DustLoveTOP #4
Chapter 8: Finished!

Taeayang and JiYong oppa are very cute , i love the way u write them like this but there's some i don't agree much.

jess ah! i think the ending is little bit unfair for the main character, it cant be so simple like this, it make me feel like SeungHyun just want to marry with her bc of he has just broken up with his gf, there's nothing can prove that he marries u bc he loves u.


I feel like there's only love from her not SeungHyun, if he dumped u for his model gf, there's no way he come back with u only bc of he broke up with his model gf, and it's realy not fair for the main character,and the proposal is quite too fast, both of them meed more more time to discuss and think about their love,


jess ah! Dont be sad at my comment, I'm sorry if it can hurt you but no pain no gain right? :D
DustLoveTOP #5
Chapter 3: finished reading it withing 15 minutes jess ah! .a great beginning, hahha i wanna slap his another cheeks lol, keep writing jess unnie encourage u! *SCREAM*
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