✽ { Smile for me } by _whitelilac
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☆ Smile for Me ☆
by: _whitelilac
//TITLE: (3/5)
It's not a unique title as I've found a lot more fanfics with this title. However, it is quite catchy and fitting to your fanfic.
//DESCRIPTION: (4/5)
It's short and plain, but I believe it gives out something worth looking forward to in your fic.
//WRITING STYLE & APPEARANCE: (3/5)
I'm not much comfortable with the colors you used in your background and poster. I'm okay with the way you write this, though.
//PLOT: (19/20)
It has a beautiful plot (I'd call this pathos: sad yet beautiful) and all but I'm quite left hanging at the end.
//ORIGINALITY: (19/20)
I guess I'd say this is pretty original, especially with that "bucket list" idea.
//FLOW: (11/15)
I felt like it's rushed, especially with the way you described Kai's actions. I can't absorb the events in my mind that much.
//CHARACTERS: (13/15)
Like what I said, Kai's actions are fast, although I could go along with them.
//GRAMMAR & SPELLING: (15/15)
None at all I believe n_n
//OTHER REMARKS:
Kai you are such a qt ;A;
//t o t a l: (87/100)
thanks for requesting! n_n
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