Chapter 9

The girl who can't break up , the boy who can't leave .

Few years later ...

"Yumi ahh , come here to appa" Kang Hyo Mae walk unstablely towards Gary . Gary took her and walk towards JiHyo who is playing with the baby . "Omma ?" ask Yumi aegyo . Gary sit besides JiHyo and later kiss her cheeck . " Thank you baby , for everything . I love you"says Gary romanticly . JiHyo could only blush . "Yaaaaa , here our cute Monday Couple !"shouted JongKook . Gary put Yumi down and Yumi straight foward going to JongKook . JaeSuk tease them making they both blush . Byul and HaHa also bring their child , Dream , to the hanging out . What a nice day to have a picnic at this park . Gary look at JiHyo , making he love her more . He always remind himslef that hardwork never betrays and it is really true . All the things he did for JiHyo were worth it . The scenery is really beautiful , with the RunningMan Family having their picnic which is full of talks and laughter . What a nice day :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Olaaaaaa ~ The end !! Yayyy , after I really got blanked about what to write next . Sorry for the short chapters . And sorry for the late update . Hope you guys enjoy my work . Well , I know this still aren't good like the other stories but hey , people can learn . Thanks for reading :) I love you and goodbye ;)

Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!
Back to Top ↑

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
angel2001 #1
Chapter 9: New suscriber here!!Update soon ^_^
caesar666 #2
Chapter 9: Just found your story and I've got to say that you've done a pretty good job!

If I may say a bit of critique, on some chapters, they're seems to be a bit rushed. But the overall flow of the story is still fine and I enjoy reading it.
Thank you!
BiscuitTeacher #3
Chapter 5: Hahaha, he doesn't like her wearing high heels simply because it surely makes him look shorter than her right? ahahaha..funny..but then he did say that in one of the Running Man episodes, didn't he? What happen next? Why there's no update yet? I'm filled with curiosity you know..jeongmal! T.T
BiscuitTeacher #4
Chapter 4: Kyaaakkk!~ He's patted her head and kissed her forehead? What a brave approach Kang Gary! Hahaha..Ji hyo-ah, please remember him! Poor that peaceful guy! hahaha..Anyway, I have a kind request here for you..I think you should synchronize the type and size of font that you are using to write this story. It does bother my concentration while doing my reading..Not for this chapter only but the rest as well..hehehe..
BiscuitTeacher #5
Chapter 3: Reading this piece of yours is actually soothing my stress..hehehe..This plot actually inspires me to write something too, but then I have to hold it in for the time being, too busy with assignments..Ok, comment for this chapter: I could imagine the scene that you described here between this Monday Couple..my question is, will Ms. Mong remember it? hehehe..ok, I'll go with the next chapter to find out! Can't wait! Fighting!
BiscuitTeacher #6
Chapter 2: Oh come on Kang Gary! It's her! Ms.Mong is your Chun Seung Im!!
I'm not going to comment further than that! I can't wait for the next chapter to be honest! hehehe..I enjoy any fan fiction related to Running Man, I don't really care about grammatical mistakes or the flow of the story because I am not a professional writer, so I think making mistakes is part of learning..Aja! Aja! ^^
BiscuitTeacher #7
Chapter 1: Even though it's quite choppy, but still I like the idea of the story line. Ring? hahaha, it reminds me the moment when Gary tried to fit the can-ring to Ji Hyo's finger. I forgot what episode it was. Okay, finished chapter 1, now moving on to chapter 2! hehehe..
poisedon #8
Chapter 5: hahaha.... fighting!!! and update soon please...
islandborn420 #9
Chapter 4: not trying to be a douche or anything just figured it might be good for you to read what you previously wrote before continuing with a new chapter. It helps to keep the flow of the story constant, don't know if anyone else noticed but in Ch.4 you had Jihyo wondering why Gary doesn't have a girlfriend when it was explained to her about his seung-im in Ch.1 so that part threw me slightly
vevina #10
Chapter 4: alright baby...fighting!!!
Back to Top ↑