Karma is good, right?

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"No, please don't--"

A shot was heard.

"I hate beggars." A girl completely covered in black and wearing a mask said. As she left the building the echo of steps of her heels were the only thing that was heard.

She entered her car and started to drive away when all of a sudden she heard sirens.

"." She said as she sped up.

She was driving through the busy streets and when she looked into the rear mirror she saw police cars following her. She drove past the red traffic light and crashed into another car.

When she opened her eyes after a couple seconds her body felt numb.

She could see passengers gathering around her car looking at her with a sorrowful look on their face.

She could see the police officers getting out of their cars and hear one calling for an ambulance.

"Please.. not yet.. I know I've done a lot of horrible things.. but please don't let me die yet.. I..." She said before she lost conscience, in hope she would wake up again..



...not knowing she wouldn't.

 

 

 

 

Foreword

Hey!! Hey you!! Yeah you there!! What are you doing here?!?!

Just kidding <3

Hello~
As you can (maybe) tell, I'm new here haha.

I've been reading a lot of stories on a lot of websites but I've never written anything before.
So now, I decided it's time for me to find out what it's like.

Also, I'm from Germany so I apologize if some (or most?) sentences come out a little weird.
I don't want to give away too much of what this story is about, though. All I can say is that it contains EXO, a young girl and a mysterious girl~

I hope you stick with me.
Please give me feedback so I can improve (a looooot~).

Until then~~



 


Started: Aug 21, 2013
Ended: Sep 3, 2013

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Moneee #1
Chapter 15: A really good story! I enjoyed reading every chapter of it! c: But it would've been better if you'd written more in the last chapters. They seem so... It happens too fast there... :c But IT'S A GREAT STORY anyway. c:
jongkey2012
#2
Chapter 15: Aw that was so sweet yet so sad, like one vicious cycle. Losing her family after they had made up so soon and even gotten married :/ Great story lovely <3
Moneee #4
Chapter 7: Waaah~! DRAMA! XD
It would've have been really good if Minha would've gone crazy, like: her mother washed the dishes and stuff and she'd just take them and throw them to the ground and then run out. Because then you could clearly see (like really clearly; without you'd see the scenario through a window and with a scene like that you'd just see it) how much she's hurt and how much she feels betrayed.
Moneee #5
Chapter 5: Too short to be funny! >3<)o)(Or maybe I'm too tired haha... No srsly, a bit too short to build up an funny... Atmosphere? XD)
LaLeLuLand #6
romancefreaks: Nooo please don't think about killing anyone~ and no flipping furniture, okay? :D

authentic22: She did, didn't she... :'(

Taestal_Kaifany: Whauw! Thank you so much! I smiled a lot reading that comment! *blush blush* <3

minniscule: All good things come to an end? :'(

Moneee: Hihi thank you~ Go read, read, read! Hwaiting~
Moneee #7
Epic beginning! I love the last two sentences ahihi~ *u* Gonna read read read!!
minniscule #8
Chapter 15: Just when everything seemed so fine and then this... :(
authentic22 #9
Chapter 15: NOOOOOO!!!!
She died ._.