The words flow so well! It's so poetic and beautiful <]

soooooooo poetic!!!this should be on a book or something!!! :))

what a catchy title.<br />
love this.

whoa.. it's actually really good!<br />
i never thought of TaemiNana pairing, but they turned up so good together, maybe it's also because of the story you delivered :') it's saddening but also touching at the same time, how Taetae's 4 Hyungs are always be with him, in happy or sad moments, and i can imagine how Taemin acts strong in front of Nana (his Noona, btw) even though he must feel devastated as well..<br />
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the length and chosen words for this short story is in the perfect amount, and it makes the story shines even more. the simplicity actually makes it sadder than i could imagine.. you did a great job :3 and thanks for this heartbreaking-but-touching oneshot!<br />
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z