Chapter 2: Awhhhhh this was so fluffy and so pure. And I could totally understand how whipped yeol became everytime baek gave his cute eye-smile bc same

Chapter 1: Awwww.... love this ! It's sooo cute! :33

Chapter 1: aaawwww this is too cute >///<

I kinda feel like something's missing towards the end, but I can't exactly pinpoint what. But other than that, I love this story VERY MUCH! It's not rushed, and I love the way you write it, I mean with the language and all. ^^

I also love the basic idea of the story, I don't know if this is even a correct way to describe a story, but it makes me feel all cozy while reading it. Weird much? Hehe. Please write more BaekYeol story! :D

Chapter 1: Ah, le fluff~~~ I am the biggest fluff lover and I'm bowing to you, because holy fish this is so cute and fluffy and not hurried at all~
I love this. <3

Chapter 1: ASDFGHJKLSDJKLGDHJDDASGHJKL THIS IS SO ING FLUFFY AND SWEET I'M CRYING BLOOD AND PUKING RAINBOWS AND UNICORNS ;~;
IDOL!CHANYEOL X FAN!BAEK IS JUST SO GREAT IT GIVES ME SO MUCH FEELS ESPECIALLY THE ING PIGGYBACK RIDE /SQUEALS SCREAMS WAILS WEEPS/ SRSLY THE PIGGYBACK RIDE PART WAS THE ING BEST AND THE ING SWEETEST ; AAA ;

PLS MAKE MORE BAEKYEOL FICS LIKE THESE AUTHORNIM ILY XOXO<33333333333

Chapter 1: Don't know what to say. The writing is bizarre. It's choppy, ungrammatical, and just, plain strange. "Conspire" as a transitive verb?
"Beakhyun defeated."? "Defeated is, in fact, transitive, and what that phrase could possibly mean is beyond me. Though a meaning comes through, it is so seasickness-inducing that it is physically painful to read. You do not speak English. You need an editor/proofreader or you need to write in your native language.

Chapter 1: love it <333 ♥

Chapter 1: this is so cute, but hey, you wrote "he inhaled Chanyeol's smile" instead of Chanyeol's scent ^-^

Chapter 1: Ugh! My feels! ♥♡