SUSEOHAN Radio!

by

_SuhoBunny

Once again, instead of reviewing this story according to a marking scheme, I'll be passing out some comments instead.

The title pretty much says everything: A radio show featuring our beloved Seohyun along with Suho and Luhan. 

So far (as of 4/9/2013), this story has three chapters and to be honest it is not much to work with since each chapter is quite short so I'l be basing my review on what I've got.

This story is of course about SUSEOHAN's radio show and through the process of creating this big project, Seohyun gets to spend more time with the two male leads. For the time being, who she ends up with is still a mystery but it does say it's a Seohan and Seoho story so I'll be keeping my eyes on the updates. Hopefully, _SuhoBunny could liven things up with some drama since Suho seems less involved than Luhan.  

Like her other stories(i.e. SMTown Chatroom series), SUSEOHAN Radio! is a lighthearted "rom-com" read. However, it seems that this time, she has decided to go with the traditional story, meaning a fixed storyline. Still, instead of expressing the plot with words, she has opted using all conversations to convey it. In my opinion, there are pros and cons to this style of writing. On one hand, it may be much more interesting to see characters interacting with each other; on the other, readers do not exactly have a clear idea of the settings of the story, the details of each and every character and the inner thoughts of each individual. Personally, I prefer the traditional way of converying a story since readers get to know the characters better and have a much more enjoyable read. Of course, writing in this neo- style saves more time and it converys the story directly and avoids deviation. 

It would be great to see longer chapters since each chapter is relatively short to provide some sort of . There are also some grammatical mistakes so it's best to proofread to make sure they do not exist. After all, unlike chatrooms where grammar is absolutely ignored, a story like this should steer clear of such mistakes. 

This is but a short review but I hope this was helpful. Please forgive me if I sound a bit harsh to you, yet, it is only my wish to help you improve the story. It's okay if you don't take my advice for I'm but an amateur as well :P I'll most certainly continue reading the story :D