Goodbye Heaven..

A Devil's Temptation

Choi Residence

Jinri came home and saw her older brother Siwon on the sofa watching soccer on the TV while enjoying eating his barbecue flavored chips, she went over to him and hugged him from the back

"Huh?" he exclaimed because of shock then unwrapped Jinri's arms around his neck "Ya, Choi Jin--" he stopped when he saw Jinri's puffy eyes and red nose

"Jinri, are you crying?" he stood up then put his hand on her face to check "Oppa!" she cried out and hugged Siwon tight

Siwon was dumbfounded when Jinri became so emotional but he had no choice to hug her back "Is something wrong?" he asked

"I-I..s-saw.. Minho a-and.. S-Soojung..." she was sobbing between her sentence "What? What are they doing?" Siwon asked

Jinri can't hold back the pain anymore and cried her heart out "They're together." she said

Siwon was shocked, he knows that Jinri and Soojung have been bestfriends since kindergarten and he trusts Minho so much because he is the captain of the soccer team where Minho is a member

"D-Don't worry, I'll talk to him tomorrow, don't cry." he was carressing her long black hair "There is no use oppa, he and Soojung are so much inlove." she was shaking her head while stating her statement

"No Jinri, I have to hear an explanation." Siwon insisted "There's an explanation, they both cheated on me because they don't love me anymore." she said

Siwon wiped the tears on his sister's face "Don't worry, it will be fine." he smiled and comforted her

 

"What?!" Minho's younger sister Naeun blurted out "Oppa are you crazy?" she scratched her head from irritation

Naeun is a year younger than Minho and likes Jinri to be his oppa's girlfriend very much, she and Jinri always bond together like a sister-sister relationship

"You're cheating on her? H-How could you oppa?!" she hit him with a pillow

Minho was hit by the pillow "Ouch, ya! Is it my fault that I'm already inlove with her bestfriend?" Minho raised his voice

"Duh. Of course, it's your feelings, you should've fought it because you have a girlfriend." Naeun confronted his older brother

Minho knows that Naeun is right, he should've controlled his feelings for Soojung but then one day Soojung confessed to him and they were together behind Jinri's back

"Oppa, I really can't believe you." she became teary eyed "How can you be so cruel to Jinri unnie? You know I really don't like that Soojung girl." Naeun twitched her lips

"Ya, give some respect she's your unnie!" he raised his voice "Why? Did you two give respect to Jinri unnie?" she fought back

Minho was silent, he knows that everytime he change a topic it will always come back to his problem when he's talking to Naeun

"I really can't believe you oppa." she said "I'm really disappointed in you." Naeun got out of her room

Minho covered his hands on his face "What have I done? What have I done?"

Seoul University

Jinri came late to school, she was about to open the classroom door when the bell rang and her classmates when out of their classroom

She was about to enter the classroom when she bumped onto Minho, an awkward silence was placed because they can't look in each other's eyes

Jinri took a deep breath and entered the classroom, with one step away from Minho, he grabbed her arm

"What do you want?!" Jinri blurted out "I'm sorry." he said "Let go of me!" she wriggled her arm to free herself

"Please accept my apology." Minho pleaded "Accept your apology? Why do I have to?" Jinri questioned him

Minho looked straight into her droopy eyes "Jinri, I love yo--" "Don't say 'I love you' say 'I loved you' or say 'I love you but I also love Soojung'" she interrupted him

"Jinri." Minho called "Don't explain, just say that our love is true but it's now a lie." Jinri ordered

"A lie? No, Jinri. Our love wasn't a lie." Minho corrected her "You're right but your sentence is wrong, my love wasn't but yours was." she stated

"I know that I did something very wrong and I'm very sorry." he said "Why can't you forgive me?" he asked

"Unnie! Don't forgive oppa, okay?" Naeun said thru the phone "It hurts so much." Jinri sobbed

Naeun took a deep breath "You should let them be and forget them, they're mean." "I know. They're not worth it for my cries." she replied

"So what are you going to do?" Naeun asked "I don't know. They destroyed my life, I should destroy theirs too." Jinri said

Jinri took a deep breath "You... and Soojung.."

"What?"

"You and Soojung deserve to die." she hissed "W-What?" Minho was dumbfounded

Jinri slapped him hard on the face "Don't you ever come near me anymore, you deserve to rot in hell." she stated and walked away

"What happened? What happened to my sweet little angel?" Minho thought as tears were rolling down his red cheek..

 

 

 

 

 

Dear MinSul shippers,

A bonus chapter! Hehehe, hope you like it :))

Love, authornim MinSulBaby

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danielalmh #1
Chapter 12: Autor num actualización plizb
atebabylhyn08 #2
Chapter 12: is jinri will going to tell siwon her plan or keep it by herself?.can't wait for the update authornim..pls..update soon..thanks!.
Minsul_erialc #3
Chapter 12: Hope you will Update soon!
zangsia1 #4
Chapter 12: authornim
it has been very difficult forJinri,maybe just this once she can ask to ask siwon oppa not to tell the others yet
kimipuys #5
Chapter 12: Authornim how are you? Finally you are back hehehe....hmm what happened next? Im so curious. Thanks. Good luck for your school
mariehojas #6
Chapter 12: tnx for the update i miss minsul pls updae soon
ayumisuzuki #7
Chapter 12: I like that you come back.please update this story..i want to see how this revenge going.
atebabylhyn08 #8
Chapter 11: authornim..plsss..update soon..
foreverjonginjinri #9
Chapter 11: Woah so this is y-ssul story huh? I like it!! Jeju+minsul..cant wait hoho /evil smirk/
peachjinri
#10
Chapter 11: i laughed so hard at this line "taste my cherry lipstick " lol..sulliyah..xDD
omo can't wait the jeju meeting lol...
wait minho and soojung is married?
or they just engage but live in same house?