The Man She Loved!

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Hey hey hey!! 
 
Okay so I have finally started to write the oneshot xD
 
I had it done on some papers but I was to lazy to write it on the computer..
 
And I have a new laptop as well so I am not really used to it xD
Still learning where everything is ._. It's hard!! ><
 
But yeah the story will be up really soon and I hope you will like it.. 
 
 
I neary stated to cry when I wrote it because some parts in the story is real things that happened and remembering those things is really painfull but I had to write it down and share it ^^'
 
There aren't any names in the story so it is up to you and your imagination to make the names and persons ^^ I didn't want to have any idols or something like that in the story, but I hope you still will like it ^^

Foreword

The girl:

The girl is 18 years old.

In love with her closest guy friend.

She is shy when it comes to confessing.

 

The guy:

The guy is 20 years old.

Doesn't know that he girl is in love with him.

He doesn't go to school anymore.. xD

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Tsukitaiyo #1
Chapter 1: wow. You're certainly right, this isn't like the usual 'you'. It's more the deeper and 'behind the mask' girl that is writing this from her heart.
And knowing that this is based on your life a bit makes it even more sad. I think that this writing style, or so to say suits you. And you'll most likely be able to do something even more amazing with some practise.
But let me tell you this,
If you write from your heart, you'll reach out to your readers and they'll feel the connection. I did. I could relate to this myself, so therefore you succeeded in making an impact.
So, that being said; I'm sorry if I'm too 'serious' but I just wanted to give you my sincere thoughts about it, which you asked for xD
I truly want to see you write more like this, it was really well done.
Peace ouuuuut~
lastdivinesong #2
Good idea, Updatee! ;u;
Jonghyuns-wife #3
I like this idea, update soon, neh? ^^
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