Eclipse Vitality

Description

 

“Sometimes legends make reality, and become more useful than the facts.” ~Salman Rushdie

When a mysterious legend comes to life, the true possessor of an ancient sword must return it to its rightful place. When a newly formed martial arts team known as SHINee comes together, they depart on an expedition to seek out the special powers of this sword and return it to the place whence it came, without it falling into the hands of an evil force. To succeed, SHINee must learn to stick together and conquer through hardships of their teamwork, their duties, their past, and love. Little did they know, the true possessor of the sword has a great destiny waiting for him…but will SHINee be able to survive the encounter?

 

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Well there you have it ladies and gents! BUT if you don't mind, before we get started here let me fill you in on a few things first.

*AHEM* This is not only my first SHINee fanfic, this is my FIRST fanfic EVER! Yep, number one so we will see how this goes, eh? ;)

Anyway, I have been a devouted Shawol for about nine months now (I know I am very late, haha), so I will try to make this story as interesting as poosible, especially since it's the first time I have tried something like this. I am a little excited, yet very nervous at the same time so please bare with me? O:) HALO FACE!

So this story is going to take place in the world called Korea. Yes a seperate planet called Korea. I love the Asian culture so so much! Well, mainly the Japanese, Chinese, and Korean. :) ANYWAY...the point I'm trying to make here is that there is going to be a mix of Japanese, Korean, and possibly (still not sure) Chinese aspects thrown into this story world. And just to clarify, there will be a place called Japan, okay? WHOA! So much Asian-ness! Best thing EVER, right?! :D

Also, my story will not focus on any certain language, except maybe some Japanese clues here and there, who knows haha. But I'm just going to say don't worry about the language unless something comes up! :)

So the concept of my story, I am trying to go for an adventure/action/romance/fantasy concept. I really like mixing things together apprently, lol! Not only am I Japanese, I'm also Italian and us Italians like a mixture of things, especially food! heehee! BUT not the point....anyway!

As for the content, it will be relatively innocent, because I am actually very innocent, haha. Anywho, there will be a couple curse words here and there (at most hell and damn). I hope that's okay, if not please let me know? heheheh. Oh and for the lovey dovey stuff in here, I believe the young innocent love is the most romantic!

I will try to update as much as possible, but I am a very slow writer. And once I get something finished I tend to leave it off and not post it haha, but I will do my best.

Alright I think that is all I need to say, I'm sorry to take up so much time. I tend to talk a lot because I like to thoroughly explain things to people so that they will understand what is going down. The problem is I am not very good at explaining things, haha! So I hope this helped you out a little bit and if you got questions, fill free to ask! :)

Oh I forgot one last thing! Just to makes this a little more fun, there will be an ocassional SHINee song lyric hidden in the story line! YAY SHINee! It will be written in English. So if you spot it, name the song in the comment box! Don't worry I will leave a clue for you! YAY! Okay I'm just going to shut up and let you read the forward now. O:)

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ENJOY!

Foreword

 

“You are in denial. As much as you don’t want to accept this, it does not change that you are the one. Only you can go forth and succeed in this task. You know it is true. You have the power to end it all.”

End it all, this shadowed inferno that has infected our world. I tried to imagine it, the peace and serenity being restored everywhere for the first time in so many years. Unfortunately, it wasn’t that simple for me. I looked down at the stone sitting right in front of me. Just one look, I knew she was right. As much as I did not want to believe it, I had to face the devastating reality. It was I, and I alone, that can finish everything.

“This is your destiny. Only you have the power to make HIM perish and save your world.”

My entire life…I spent my entire life thinking that all of this was just a myth. A legend. Yet here I stand, far from home, realizing that I may never return, and never witness the calm being restored. Everything happened because I was the one. I was the one destined to end it all. I knew from the beginning that it was my destiny. No one else. I knew I could not let this Armageddon continue like this…I will not let it continue like this.

“I know what I must do,” I said calmly looking at the stone. “The only problem is….what am I going to tell the others? What am I going to tell sensei?”

I gently placed my hand on my heavy heart, “And most importantly…”

The tears started to form in my eyes.

….what am I going to tell her?

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sahl-li #1
shinee!! keepon updating please
iknowright
#2
<3
CherryBlossom90 #3
So I just finished reading another girls story and have to wait for updates now. I have only read the first few paragraphs though but I can tell that you are another author that takes plot and grammer seriously! Thumbs up. I will catch up on your story tomorrow though, it's late where I'm at. I'm looking forward to it!
chippawabrike
#4
Ah, a good Samurai fic. We can't help but love them, can we? I write a (only recently) marginally popular Samurai fic called "Of Samurais and Shadows", and trust me, I know just what it's like to not get recognition for something you put so much work into.
You're doing great! Substantial storyline, characterisation and all important grammar are all spot on. One mistake I picked up on was, in Chapter 1:
'What a glorious day.'
This needs to be italicised and set on it's own line as it is the characters 1st person thoughts, as opposed to first person description in a past/present tense.
Anyways, so I would like to advertise this story in mine. If that's okay with you, please wall post me and I will include the link in my next chappie!
Keep fighting, it's taken me so long to get where I am now with my story :\ *cough cough 30 whole chapters cough*
HWAITING!
Minspro
#5
This is a really good story, I was just browsing through the adventure fics when I came across this one!!!
Keep updating, I love this fic ^_^
shininglucifer
#6
yay an update! <333 very well done! ^.^
I love how you portray the boys here; so unique from anything I've seen before. (and Taemin is so cute of course! haha) Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
<3333
im-so-curious
#7
Wow your story is amazing :D You're a really good writer
kpoplover4191 #8
wow very interesting! i cant wait to read the next update!! so happy shinee will finally be in it!!!
shininglucifer
#9
Omg I can't wait for your next chapter! :) <br />
I was just playing some Zelda right now....and this story reminds me of Zelda games! hehe good job! <br />
Update soon. :)
Liv2Dance
#10
i watched like two episodes of sailor moon but i dont remember and dont know the story about it lol. i love the characters though