so.....this story is obviously not planned well.....and I'm thinking of just ditching this and starting a new story, so if you guys don't mind, I'll just be pretending this was never here (I'm kinda too lazy to remove this story) and hopefully(maybe not so hopefully) I'll be back with a better story (if i can actually make one)

as you an see, all of us here prolly agree that this story is done pretty badly XD if i turn into a better writer (maybe) I'll prolly consider rewriting this in the future or something haha