inhaling flames (and eating the ashes afterward)

Description

he breathes in and inhales the smoke in order to purge himself because he is dirty, and he knows it. 

Foreword

 

 

he watches it burn, turning black and blue

 

stepping on the fallen ashes

 

before saving himself.

 

 

----

 

it's never too late.

 

 

kim jongdae decides that it is. 

 

 

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title: inhaling flames (and eating the ashes afterwards)

genre: angst

rating: trigger warning - suicide, insanity

length: 3,203 words

contest entry for don't regret dark writing contest

 

credits :

poster and bg : kimxbb@fatefuldreamer

review : momodays90@midnightsonata

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AhRa92
#1
--pearl
#2
Chapter 3: you never cease to amaze me... how you bring psychological and dark fics to a whole new level owo
redocean-
#3
i found out about this story whilst scrolling through my friend's (macchiato-) recommendation thread.
i had to read this twice before finally understanding the story and just whoa.
i really like this fic and i'm actually fond of reading psychological fics, and this story of yours - i must say - is probably the first psychological story that describes insanity in a very different way.
you're able to grasp the feeling precisely and just ... wow.


thank you for writing this beautiful piece.
looking forward for more of your stories!
JEONJUNGK00K #4
Chapter 3: Omg I love this so much I could cry
sushi_sykes
#5
Chapter 3: I'm at a loss for words this is so amazing. Please this is so good write more
exothermc
#6
Chapter 1: mei i'm crying so hard and laughing at kim jongdae/chen and ho ho ho somehow i knew yixing was going to take part in this and he DID
pandasmiles #7
Thanks for updating~^^ on my birthday too <3