finding bones (and a dead man)

Description

There's something festering in here. Myungsoo's not sure whether it's his flesh or his mind. 

Foreword

 

 

He's a dead man with no corpse, 
A skeleton with no bones. 

(But why is Sungyeol holding them in his hands?)

 

 

"I think we are in the rats' alley,
where the dead men have lost their bones."

 

 

 


 

 

pairing : myungyeol (slight)
genre : angst, psychological
rating : pg-13 (violence, insanity, and somewhat graphic descriptions included)
length : 4815 words

entered in the wicked writing contest

inspired by t.s. eliot's "the wasteland" and this gif

note: this fic is best enjoyed and understood if carefully read
and on a desktop/computer - not mobile).

 

all ideas are mine solely as a work of fiction and a product of my own creativity and creative property 

     

 

 

 

 

aeterniti
endnotes are up

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YeoLalaland
#1
Chapter 4: Turns out I misinterpret the whole story. My stupidity is proven here so excuse my low iq. Reading this makes me feel like in a diff world. Srsly this is awesome. Thanks for the new info. Just, wow, really. Such a masterpiece.
Coffee2s #2
Chapter 4: This was such a beautiful story! I love how well planned out it was. Thank you for writing.
Yeol_is_love
#3
Chapter 4: thanks it was pretty awesome story. I really enjoyed it.
eleutheromaniac #4
Chapter 3: Yooooo, I'm kind of happy that I didn't read the epilogue in your draft because it ties the story together so beautifully! Getting to see some insight on Myungsoo/L's past made me feel more pity for his character, and I liked the emphasized relationship he had here with Sungyeol. A bit salty that mobile won't let me highlight the text above "and he crumbles into dust," so I'll pester you to tell me about it later. LOL.

I absolutely loved this. I missed reading your writing! ;3;
YeoLalaland
#5
Chapter 3: SERIOUS HEADACHE. This is awesome yet scary at the same time. I tried reading this xxxxtra carefully but please excuse my dumb brain. The moment when I thought I get everything it suddenly got even more confusing. Okay Myungsoo is insane and L is his hallucination. Maybe. And he killed Sungyeol out of consciousness. Maybe. And the coffin resembles something like he was trapped in his own world and he couldnt escape. Maybe. I tried highlighting the decaying part but Im already losing my mind by now. Oh my insanity. (But seriously this is one hella awesome work. How did u write this?!)
Yeol_is_love
#6
Chapter 3: Did he kill Sungyeol? Please tell me
eleutheromaniac #7
Super excited for this fic, Mei! Your foreword's looking great. c: