Chapter 1: huahaha XD
that situation sure are creepy!

Chapter 1: Check for the fluff, cuteness and sweetness
Gaaah see how serious i was when i said im addicted to you stories?

Chapter 1: Toooo cutee!! Gah, I love your stories >.< you are an awesome author as you are able to take cliche ideas and literally make it unique... How do you do it? lol

Chapter 1: kris you lil tease~ I was tense when I'm read this >_<

Chapter 1: Too adorableeeee kyaaaa ><

Chapter 1: Aww so cute ><

Chapter 1: Omgg totally in love with this one!

Chapter 1: What a meanie! Haha.
But totally cute in the end. :)

Chapter 1: You had me thinking that they'd both be werewolves of sorts and that they were in her territory and not his! Oh how wrong I was. Once I picked that hint up (that is, that it /wasn't/ about werewolves) things were more .. Mmn .. 'straightforward' and of a pattern I'm more used to. :). Hm. I miss other mythical creatures, the vampire, werewolf and Mage/wizard/witch phase has kinda duckies all the creativity out of people, if you know what I mean. ;~~; It's a shame. I wish we all manage to find or retain our creativity. It should be something that shapes our identity I believe.

Also, you missed a typo. :3 "our breathing" -> "your breathing". It's around a quarter of a way into the story I think. Right before she feels that her senses are magnified. :3