My Secret Promise.

Description

A promise made a long time ago, and without you knowing, i've kept it. The key to the secret belongs to you, and it is your choice to discover it.

 

Meet Kim Kibum, only grandson of the prestigious Kim Seung Corporation, the smart and kind Student coucil president, and the school hottie that everybody wants to date. But underneath the shining facade lies a boy with a not-so-shiny history.

What made him change? And how will he change again when his past catches up with him, as he finds himself sinking deeper and deeper to a one-sided love with someone he's not supposed to fall for?

A difficult love story between a boy and another boy, and the little things in between.

Foreword

A story stemming from their childhood to their teenage years; a boy, who kept his feelings a secret; and him, who had a traumatic past, but got over it - because of that boy.

A story, where a boy falls for another boy; and the little experiences that brought them something greater.

A story, where after many obstacles, two bestfriends found something more to their relationship.

A story, where two kids found love.

 

Oh yeah oh yeah, i changed the title to [My Secret Promise].

FYI, it was [A Promise to you, my secret to keep]

I figured that a short title makes my head spin less when i'm going through my storyline. And i think it sounds better.

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jjongluvbummie
#1
Chapter 4: a nice chp.liked it
nihongo24 #2
Chapter 4: update pls...!!! <3
Taeminmypants
#3
Chapter 2: SDKJSKDH WHAT DO YOU MEAN BEGINNER? This is awesome *w*
Giraffrey
#4
Chapter 1: YAY! For a beginner you are pretty decent XD update it soon please! As for your projects, I know that feeling all too well. I'd love to help you, but I'm a beginner too! Hope you can return the favour, though I haven't actually uploaded a chapter, just the foreword. :) Your writing is generally coherent and clear, which is pretty much what is expected in anything you write. That is good. The writer's tools and little techniques that you used are rather effective, though sentence structure could be more varied, or your fanfiction will sound like a composition. I sort of skimmed through your fanfiction because I'm slightly pressed for time, and I spotted a few grammar mistakes which didn't really affect the reading, but it would be good to do a once-over. Since this is the initial stage of your fic, I am looking forward to seeing how you employ your descriptive skills i.e. show off your vocabulary (note: do not use in excess - this is asianfanfics after all) and the development of your plot. All in all, I am looking forward to future chapters. Partly because I am jongkey biased, but never mind. :) Hope it helps!
zakiakhan #5
Chapter 1: Aww it sound so good plz update it i really want to read it saranghae