narrator's note;;

Vanity Scare
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I talk in riddles forth and back

For I am the narrator, please keep track

I am here to set a couple of things straight

So please don’t be confused as I elaborate.

This is a story of two people’s intertwined but unwinding fate

Be sure to note the mirror’s plague is naught but straight

 

It performs a duty to us all

It shows pure honesty for those who fall

For the deceptive tricks of the mind

Who may after all, be guilty of crime.

 

What people do and what people say

Is not, sometimes, what they want to relay

But what can we do when they themselves do not know

The true, deep-down feelings that they hold?

 

Even if the mind tricks us

The mirror will not

For the mind has twists and turns

That the mirror haven’t got.

 

Yet please hold caution for I don’t not mean physically

Mirrors reflect much more than the aesthetic beauty

But it reflects the heart as well

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plottwist
#1
Chapter 1: A beautiful narrator's note. I'm amazed by how you play with the words that I can't stop myself from commenting even before I start reading the very first chapter. Well, I think I've been a fan of your story for quite long by now. Yes, I subscribed and read your other stories but this one seems different than the others. Keep up the good work! You are a very talented writer.
icy_summer
#2
I love it!!!You have an interesting plot, I can't wait to read it~
tarachan
#3
Chapter 3: Wow you guys really have a good idea you know.. Somehow the story's complicated, but I hope I'll understand soon with the more chapters you give us.

Why I have a feeling the new secretary is Sena-_- and anyway,
the shadow girl you mentioned earlier in this chapter, I suppose it was Sena's reflection(?) And who was talking with the shadow girl??
kaikaihun #4
Chapter 3: Interesting story you have here. You surely have a great imagination to get the idea. It's cool really..
I'll definitely stick with you thru the story. Have a nice journey writing it! :))
hamskkuma #5
Chapter 3: She's inside the mirror? Dx
bluestar000
#6
Chapter 3: Wow. This story is really... really just wow.
It's tad bit different? A good different of course ^^ This is promising :)
JinChan
#7
Chapter 3: ...im getting chills up n down my spine as i read this, but that's good!
flyingbearcookies
#8
Chapter 3: wait so is the person that's in control of kris, kris, or is it his reflection?
doreenii_21
#9
Chapter 2: She lost her reflection??
JinChan
#10
Chapter 2: ...ok, this has sorta got me freakin' out a lil...
But it sounds interesting..!