A Beautiful Pain

Description

Title: A Beautiful Pain
Pairing: Kaisoo, Kyungsoo-centric, slight!Kyungmyun
Length: 9k~
Genre: Angst, Broken!Kyungsoo
Rating: PG
Summary: Kyungsoo tries to get over Kim Jongin, but it's easier said than done.
Warning: There is a lot, and I mean a lot of moping in this lol

Foreword

A/N: Another fic to add to my collection! I am learning and it's conclusive that I am a slow learner lolol Please do enjoy reading! 

Do comment! Your comments give me strength and I surely need a lot of it after busting out this lol Lotsa love <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

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mushuu234 #1
Chapter 1: I love how this story was portrayed, it was so detailed and precise, it literally made me feel the pain Kyungsoo felt, and at the kiss scene, it was just all so sad how Jongin couldn't feel anything.. this has got to be one of the best angst story I've ever come across.
Don't stop writing! x
iBeautyBlossom #2
Chapter 1: I have read this story a while ago but didn't comment, so that's what I'm doing now ^^ I am normally a silent reader, because it's really hard for me to formulate constructive criticism or any kind of feedback at all.

But I just have to comment on this. As you may know, there are two general kinds of angst stories: tragedy and suffering. This story is seriously the best example of 'suffering angst' (without being too traumatic) I have ever come across.

For writing suffering angst you really have to write A LOT, you have to include every single detail of the character's train of thought. While the plot is still important, the feelings stand in the foreground. You are the only one I can think of right now to have managed this without being repetitive.

I seriously felt as if I was Kyungsoo (and kind of had an existential crisis after finishing this story but let's not go there).
This was the most detailed description development of heart ache I have ever seen. (I'm using too much superlatives in this comment XD)
Also, when Kyungsoo and Jongin were kissing I felt so empty, it was scary. It was just too emotional /_\

I have just realized that my comment is all over the place... This is why I normally don't leave comments, omg
I will just quietly leave now.

Don't stop writing, you have so much talent <3
familiarsadness #3
Chapter 1: I was trying my best to not read the ending because I want to read it with full of patience but seriously, Jongin? WHY THE DO YOU LIKE GIRLS WHEN A KYUNGSOO IS HAVING A ONE MEGA BIG TERA LOVE FOR YOU? Sighs. Thank you for the great story, author-nim. I really really really enjoy this masterpiece.

p/s: Thank you for le' kiss between Kyungsoo & Jongin. It heals my shipper heart, haha.
Cho-chan #4
Chapter 1: this hurts my shipper heart so much TT_TT beautifully written, kudos for that!!
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