Broken

Description

An angsty 2min oneshot. 

 

I wasn't exactly in the best mood while writing this and i needed a let out. So i thought, why not write a story.

 

This is my first time writing a 2min angsty oneshot. Constructie criticisim is higly appreciated. 

 

I honestly got teary eyed writing this, so sorry in advance XD

 

Comments is love <3

Foreword

“I am extremely sorry baby. , I cant tell you how sorry I am, but she really needed me Taemin. What would you have done if you were in my situation? Think about it Taemin-ah”

“I left everything I knew for you Minho. I guess along the way you forgot that you ARE my life Minho. Everything I did was for you. Even now I don’t hate you. God I can’t even bring me to hate you. I can only wonder where I went wrong. Was I not good enough Minho? Was my love not enough for you, was I too ugly for you or was it because I am guy? What was it Minho? I only wanted you to be happy Minho. I wanted us to be happy” I fall to my knees gripping on to his shirt, bringing him down with me. 

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FroggyMin #1
Chapter 1: I'm on the train and I'm tearing up. REAL TEARS! Omfg....
Cephei #2
anji i just read the foreword and im scared what do i do
Juliette07 #3
Chapter 1: Oh shi* im crying......
You r so MEAN MINHO UGH WHY?! WHY?!
OMG ㅠㅠ
pikasquad #4
Chapter 1: excuse me while I go drown in my tears
tillacgt #5
Chapter 1: I LOVE IT!!!
I can't believe how good your writing is considering how long you've been writing for!
Every story of yours I've read I've enjoyed.
Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading
Evil_Keshi #6
Chapter 1: *sobs*
That's not crappy at all ! I feel so bad for Taemin :( So maybe the girl needed Minho but ****, Taemin needs him too ! Poor Taeminnie... I don't know how he managed to be so strong !
shineeyue #7
I just want a epiloque so minho realise what he did,want to take him back but tae has found his happiness
minniemac #8
Chapter 1: This absolutely kills me. I really want a sequel where they can get bak together but I know lot every thing has a happy ending. My heart breaks for this.
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