Should Have Treated You Better

Description

Eli and Kevin are step-brothers.

Kevin develops feelings for Eli but doesn't show it...

Will Eli realise it or not?

Does Eli like him back?

Or will he treat kevin badly?

 

 

Not a song-fic...

Foreword

HI... avina_kiss_me here... 

Don't know what to write for foreword...

Coments are welcomed. Bad or good.

Silent readers please comment...

 

p/s: This fic is my own idea. Any similarities with other stories is pure coincidence. No plagarism!!

 

p/s/s: I wonder if anyone will plagarise this fic which ...

 

Back to Top ↑

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
clear_penguin #1
Chapter 1: That took me completely by surprise, wow.
I really liked it... well, not Kevin dying... or Eli cradling his dead body and being sad... you get what I mean :)
ILikeRainyWeather #2
Chapter 1: Oh I liked the idea behind the story, but I wished it was longer :p lol :p Guess I just like reading long and detailed stories :p
Thank you for writing! I enjoyed reading it ^^
5awlachan #3
Chapter 1: OMG!! this is so depressing!! sadly it was too late :"(
I actually thought right before kevin was shot that eli would bash into the house and rescue the day!!
Back to Top ↑