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Short Stories.

For everyone who reads my story 'One Day Series', this story is a spin-off.

A story from the eyes of a friend in Minho's past, finding one truth about his current life.

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A week ago, I walked through Tower Records store near my office and that song was played. I didn't know, I didn't even think about what I heard. But the lyrics caught my attention, before then I realized it’s their song.

[.. Before the arrow of light, pierces the endmark
It’s not just a matter of dodging it skillfully
Numerous times, it was fired,
And the pain was always inflicted internally.
Without realising it, it went deeper..]

Last December I received a call from unknown number.
It’s really been a while, isn’t it, Minho-ah.
How many years had passed for both of us to be apart, to be two strangers belong to such a different life.
Who would have thought that Minho I knew would sing with his group together in such a big stage like that?

[.. If you are sad, cry.
Just honestly cry as you are.
If you are still in pain after that and need someone,
Come to my side.
Come as you are..]

Yet once when we’re young, we were good friends.
You and your silly face never failed to make me laugh. Me, such a crybaby.
You and your perfect family that I never have. Me, whose parents had passed away.
You and your dream to be one great soccer player. Me, who always want to study abroad.

[..I get you better.]

I still remember how his dream was crushed.
But he never gives up.
He even gives me courage to try to reach mine.
With his hand pats my shoulder, he became the reason why I took that scholarship.
‘Through yours, maybe one day I will get mine too.’ you said.
Even though because of it, I was the one who left.
In a way, I felt like I betrayed him at that time.

[.. and the loneliness creeps up upon us.
Even the promised date has passed.
The entrance that keeps beckoning to you,
The corner where one reaches the limit of one’s grief..]

Of course I do feel lonely.
And many of our birthdays passed just like that.
I live by myself in this foreign country since I was 13.
Minho lives up to his new dream which brought him to anywhere in the world when he’s 20.
And of course, it brings him here.

[.. I will shut them off, so that they don’t distress you any further.]

I fell in love, I fell out of love.
Yet sometimes, some nights, I hope I still have you near me.
Just to make me laugh even more.
Just to make me cry at ease even more.
As a friend.
As everything you want to be.
Even if it’s just a text message from you, I know I’ll be okay.

[.. Until the day you can laugh again,
I will stay with you, no matter when that is.
Don’t let go of those hands..]

So you will be here again in Tokyo.
We will be under the same sky again.
You texted me. You call me.
I take you and your fellow member around my city.
Feels like we never really apart.
I wonder, would this be the start of our renew relationship?

[.. If you’re in pain no matter where you are,
Come to my side..]

Last December we meet again after so many years.
Last night we hang around again and talk about those days when we were kids.
Us, both on our 20 yet turn into 12 years old again.
Yet, of course, last night I realized everything has change.
Something has change.

[.. At the ends of this world,
If I can run into you there, it would be great.
I want to be with you.
Forever.]

How I love that part of the songs.
Your part, Minho-ah.
Reminds me on how great things were when we were together, younger.
Reminds me on how there’s still hope for me.

Only to be awaken by the fact.
The fact that was written on the last verse.
It’s like the last prayer you sent to me as you let me go years ago.
As if it was now build into this song.

The song that brought an honest tear to my eyes.
Naïve and unwillingly, those tears filled my eyes.

[.. Someday, no matter till where,
With just your own strength,
If you feel that you can stand up and take off,
Live, without looking back.]

To reach my dream, I let go.
You and I, we let go.

But no one is too blame, right, Minho-ah?

For now as your dream finally brings you, my friend, back to me.
Only now you are smiling happily holding the hand of someone else.

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Im back again!!

This time with my beloved Minho.

Wow i just realized in this Short Stories, all stories related to Minho are kinda sad XDDD

But i cant help it! lmao. and i love Better so muccccchhh..

The lyrics i used for the story is the english translation, in case you havent realized it yet 8D

I hope you enjoyed your reading!

Until we meet again..

lovelovelove,

Z.

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hunhunhunhun
#1
Chapter 2: Taemin! *^*
chasethestars #2
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Primarily because it shows a human side to her; sure she's the childhood friend who can do no wrong [or must do no wrong a.k.a. shouldn't overstep boundaries clearly laid out since day one], but beneath that surface is someone who has desires and weaknesses that are on the verge of awakening if provoked. Of course it is by a conscious choice if one wants to give in, and in this case she did, knowing full well that it's both unreal and temporary. Maybe that's why I like the twist, not because Jonghyun mistook her as Jieun, but because she succumbed to the same "nightmare" as Jonghyun: being loved, even if he's seeing someone else.

I'm not sure if I made much sense in the last few sentences, so I apologize in advance if there's anything unclear OTL As usual, you've done a good job and delivered with these stories, so do keep it up! ^o^
chasethestars #3
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# 11: ... How scary is it that we think alike [in regards to that ring] o_o Is it bad that the first thing I thought of when I saw that ring on his finger for the first time was: "Are you finally off the market, Taeminnie?" LOL. Jokes and assumptions aside, I was smiling to myself while reading this chapter. Leave it to Taemin to be 19/20 years of age and get away with being childish and childlike, which in turn can be frustrating at times because even if noona tries to be annoyed/angry/etc. at him, she wouldn't find the heart to because noona loves him a lot [as long as what he does is still within reason, of course] XD Also, is it wrong of me to picture Taemin giving noona the couple ring even before she could say a word or hug him? I don't know, I feel that it's just so him to do such a thing, being somewhat careless when he's excited and forgetting for a moment that there might be fans lurking about and watching his every move XD;;

I personally liked Taemin's 1920's look in the MV and had hoped that they wouldn't let him wear the extensions for too long. Those extensions were just... hilarious and tragic at the same time =-= And that would be putting it lightly on my part, believe me.

# 12: Jonghyun, I could always say your high fever has gotten the best of you and clouded your judgment, but there's no denying that you must've been extremely hurt and distraught with the breakup. Poor thing x-x [Then again, as I told you in regards to Alarm Clock's lyrics, Jonghyun doesn't seem like he's over Sekyung...]

And then there's his forever best friend who knows the truth about why Jieun broke up with him, and she also happens to be battling her feelings for him, too. It's tough to not take advantage of his vulnerable situation, and it sounds so wrong to be saying this, but I'm glad she did.
shineeninja
#4
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leave it to you to have twists like this. it's very fitting to the song though, so brava!

on another note, to make readers who imagined themselves as the protagonist of the story:
hey, he forgot his ex's birthday once, but he never forgot yours! so there must be a future for you two!!! lol.
DreamingLight
#5
hey thanks you for all of this oneshots =) they are all so beautiful and I like how you described all the charachters =)
I hope you will be able to update soon
chasethestars #6
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It's funny, but when Key mentioned an ex, I immediately thought about Minho. I went to the next line and I gasped aloud when I saw his name; I didn't know if I should be happy or speechless about it! XD;; I kinda agree with Jjong's sentiment of wanting to see friends'/relatives' ex-lovers and see how they've turned out after breaking up with them. Well, sorry Jjongie, but Minho is one of those rare types that could never transform into a toad no matter how many years shall pass. Heaven has been good to him by giving him superior genes [what is with my vocabulary these days LMAO]. So... tough luck on this one? XD I wished for more backstory between Minho and the female lead, but I also understand at the same time that he's not the highlight of the story anyway so it's okay~

The relationship between the six characters is so lovely. Reading this feels like I'm almost intruding in their lives, and it was so easy to get into the flow and mood of things =3

I'm running out of words [says the person whose comments are split into two OTL], but as usual, you've done a good job with this piece ^o^ I apologize if most of them came off more as rambling, though ;~; That aside, looking forward to the future stories; do update when time permits~! ^^
chasethestars #7
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Where to start... *___*

Key, you are so... you XD The overbearing, naggy, but surprisingly sweet you XD There's something about him in this comeback that's making me view him in an entirely new light--or maybe I just miss his blunt, cool self and I can't wait until he graces all of us with his presence during the comeback 8D His nagging seems toned down in this one; I'm guessing he and the female lead have been together for a long time that bickering even about the smallest things is just so normal and effortless for the both of them =3

Onew, oh Onew; I've been missing him for a while, but I'm glad to see he's doing well with their comeback teasers contrary to what rumors are saying. That aside, was his sangtae acting up when he asked his sister if she was pregnant? XD But he SO would be the type to drop heart-stopping questions during unguarded moments, so it kinda fits. The part where Onew said he couldn't do anything to Key when he asked for his sister's hand in marriage had me sniggering for some reason; probably because I imagined Onew wanting so badly to give him a taste of his ttakbam but couldn't, and all because of Key's piercing gaze [and solid conviction] XDD;;

TAEMIN~! X3 This... man-child LOL. How is it even possible to be a kid and an adult at the same time? He pulls it off so effortlessly despite the rebellious and cheeky undertones to his character, which I like. A lot. Probably more than I should, I dunno, but I really like it XD;; That part about the plushie made me go "Aww~!" and when he babbled out the secret, I kinda knew it was coming, but it was still shocking that he said all those things without even batting an eyelash O_o Taemin, don't worry; your noona cousin will still love you and you'll always be her number one monster, all flaws included XD
WonderShobe
#8
ZUTTORRRRRRRRRRR YOU'RE BACK~~~ <3 I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORIES > u < <3
zuttor412 #9
Below are all my replies, and i hope i didnt miss anyone >.<
Once again thank you for all your support to my stories, it means a lot to me!

Til we meet again on my new updates! see yaaa
lovelovelove
z
zuttor412 #10
Hello hello~~~
I have notice that i havent reply all the comments one by one properly through the comment segment! OMG i feel so terrible! :S
So now here I am, wanting to thankyou all of you to give it a time to read and comment on my Short Stories :)

Cutterpillow, you're right, it is fun to have SHINee members in every chapters, but where are you now, do you still read this? how are you btw?

Wondershobe, thank you for liking the EPIC Taemin's chapter. and im happy that you're finding my other stories interesting too! really, i dont think im good enough to get your praises, but i do hope that anyone will enjoy my story whenever they choose to read it :) so you want me to write a story that longer? i thought you're happy it's a short stories heheee

Blue_toast, Blood's title lead to a misunderstand about how the story might go, isnt it? XDD but im happy that you enjoy it!

sweetmarshmallow6594, Onew is your bias? so maybe that's also why you're happy to read chapter 3 teehee

min_rae, i do write another stories like you hoped for, so i hope you have read it too :)

sillyshinee5, yes, i've just realized that ALL stories in here that featured Minho doesnt really end happily XDD thankyou for help me realizing it hahaa

SHiN_MiNt, thankyou for commenting :)

3DHEART, i hope you enjoy the other stories too :)

haeyoungKIM, i finally updated :p

kurohitsuji12, i hope you like the other stories as well :D

Taemininne and ParkMiyoung,
I have explained through personal message and i hope you like the story more as you now understand it :)

Miss_Iah, but Key suits the role, doesnt he? *winks* thanks for reading my stories!

chasethestars and shineeninja, two of my closest fellow readers, and also two of my favorite authors here! thank you for always give me comment that makes me wanting to be a better writer, and i hope we are all can still enjoy each other's stories until.. forever? lol xP

Anonymous_15 thank youuu! im glad you're enjoying it..