The Demon Within

Description

A girl and five boys. They're just students, normal people with pretty normal, decent lives. But increasingly so, somebody is ruining their happy days, bringing violence, lust, distrust and the like into their lives. Can they fight against this new force? And why do those who make up this opposing force oppose each other?

Foreword

People sometimes say we're our own worst enemies. They didn't think it would be like this though...

The Girl:
I haven't even had a serious boyfriend yet?! I'm still a ! No...no...I...this can't be right...I would never.  And my best friends. They...we...

Lee Jinki:
I know I give out orders sometimes, but that's part of the job! But, I can do what?! Don't make me such a douche towards people! And I...with HER? I would never do that to her!

Kim Jonghyun:
Stop killing my relationships with people! My life was just fine before! I don't need this attention ruining my image! Especially with her! Leave me her at least, please!

Kim Kibum:
Okay so I spend a little more time on how I look than most people. Is this like...God saying I shouldn't be such a narcissist? I won't do it anymore! Promise! Just...let it not be true and leave her alone.

Choi Minho:
All I wanted to do was to play soccer. To play soccer everyday and have my friends by my side. Why me? This is tearing us apart.

Lee Taemin
:
I'm innocent! My image is the epitome of innocence and cute! Me doing those things...That can't be me. It just can't!

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The Girl
Damn them to hell! They're ing ruining every part of my life! She's not supposed to ever know!

Onew:
This might be good...she's more ignorant and easier to manipulate than that hellcat.
Oh and these ing idiots. No more Mr. Nice Guy. Welcome to Slavery 101.

Jonghyun:
Well, if I CAN get more exercise, I mind as well right? Let's heat things up. This is going to be fun!

Key:
I'm going to show him how it's done. Now they'll really know what Almighty is.

Minho:
These are one of the few times I prefer to heat things up rather than keeping it cool. Things are going to get exciting. Let's play.

Taemin
:
Aw...she's so cute. Like an animal in a false sense of security. Even when she's shivering like a scared bunny between the paws of a wolf, she's adorable.
But if anyone calls me cute, they're going to see something really UNcute.

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If you read my other fic "Lucifer's Butterfly", you'll a similarity in a pretty important character aspect. You can probably already guess what that aspect is by just the short bit above. Despite the similarity, the plot is completely different. The writing might be slightly different too. Not by much probably. I have a feeling I'll unconsciously slip into my normal ways.

This IS a supernatural fic.
This IS a
harem fic in which 5 guys get paired up with one girl.
This IS a
rated fic containing violence, , potty mouth language, etc. Unlike in "Lucifer's Butterfly", there will DEFNITELY be in this fic. However, I am not known for writing . I've never written before. Therefore, don't expect much from the . So why put it in? Because it's important. You think about that for a bit.
There IS also a
plot. I'm making this up as I go, but I definitely will have a storyline because I wouldn't forgive myself if I didn't have one with a multiple chapter fic. I could reveal more of the plot to you or give a better description. But I prefer not to devil

However, "Lucifer's Butterfly" is my first priority fic and will be updated more often than this one. Indeed, I have the first chapter of this baby done already (and that's why I'm posting this up. Because it wouldn't leave me alone -_-), but updates for this will be irregular. It's summer so I'll probably be updating both fics more often than not, but when school starts in the fall, you'd probably mostly see "LB" updates and those will be extremely irregular (I really hope to finish that fic or be close to finishing that one by then though...)

IF YOU DON'T LIKE SUPERNATURAL OR HAREM STORIES, I encourage you to read the frst few chapters of my other fic "Lucifer's Butterfly" to get a feel of what my supernatural/harem stories are like first and then decide whether or not to read this. Or you can just stop reading now before you start. Whatever floats your boat.

Comments are MUCH appreciated. Like super appreciated. No. Really. It's ridiculous how often I check for new comments per DAY. I'm trying to be better about replying to comments too. I appreciate the 'great chapter. update soon :) 's and 'oh wow! that was exciting! can't wait for more!'s but I REALLY LOVE comments that are more...substantial? This is only because I WANT to reply to comments, and I like replying with more than a 'thanks for the comment' and more substantial comments give me something to work with instead of going to the default/thoughtless reply.

Okay done my rants. Hope you at least got this far before pushing the back button or subscribing.

-Thea ^.^

Comments

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yinyin_shawol
#1
Chapter 1: Rereading~ and still as lost >< so the one who took on 5 was the nun? But it didn't sound like the nun? Sounded more like the nun was watching ><
Catz80
#2
Chapter 4: Was the girl in the 1st chapter the same girl that is their best girl friend? I am sooo confused~~~! Please update.
princess-sohee
#3
are you still gonna continue this? ;A;
yinyin_shawol
#4
So does this mean they have 2 personality? Like angel n devils? but all 5 love 1 ?
sachia
#5
Chapter 4: omgggggggg i freak out when i see your story update!!!!!
loverofcookies
#6
Chapter 4: Yay for updates :)
loverofcookies
#7
Hi :) I really like this story and I was just wondering if you were planning on continuing it.
shhrimp #8
Interesting. I want to see where this is going.
Waiting! :)
Jjskie #9
hahaha confused on whats going on exactly too, but yay!
ju_huggable
#10
OMG!! I love you! You create the best fanfic ever!!
Update both your fics soon!! It's interesting!! XD