The Flavor of a Sour Candy

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To Luhan, a relationship was like a sour candy. The wrapper looked flashy and neat, but the candy inside was bitter and awful. Luhan didn’t want to try any more of the candy. He was done. 
 
Amber has tried almost every flavor of the infamous sour candy. She hasn’t liked any of the flavors, but she was still looking for different ones to try. She’s convinced there’d be one flavor that she loved.
 
Finding love is like eating a sour candy, don't you think?
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Although the plot and the story idea is originally by me, leetaemin32596 made this comes to live :) Big applause to her! You can find her in:  -- L I G H T B U L B -- (story review and one-shot request shop)

            

Thank you to thederpchanyeol for this awesome layout! It's from: ` ✼ exotic grounds — story & profile layouts shop `
 
Lastly thank you to lotsofkpopgifs.com for collecting so many GIF's! 
 
 
Enjoy this crack OTP of mine! <3 
 
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starfan24backup 135 streak #1
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Hi Author PureBride!!

Loved reading this!! I wish there was more!!

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starfan24backup 135 streak #2
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Hi Author PureBride!!

Sounds rather cute!!

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candycehsu #3
Chapter 1: Please update soon!!!!!!! Please!! I've been waiting for a hanbe story forever and please update!! Please Please Please!!!!
BananaQTpie #4
Finally a hanber fic omgee
ladyhaemi #5
Chapter 1: super cute
Lukber #6
Chapter 1: I like ... I loved it .. this great story
nuggetss #7
Chapter 1: daaaaw this is so cute!
kwon-saedism #8
Chapter 1: kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa i loved this <3 <3
Amalya #9
Chapter 1: To be honest, I never would have pictured these two together but you make it work beautifully. They're absolutely adorable, starting off with that sort of brother/sister bickering and rivalry mentality which evolves, over time, into something deeper. It was really fun to watch their development actually and the competitiveness between them was hilarious. It looks like Kris actually wanted her to win, or Luhan to lose, in that game. It's hard to say for sure. hehe

On a side note, it's hard to tell that English isn't your first language as everything pretty much fits as if it was. Bravo. :) The story flows nicely, with time jumps that aren't too jarring and it's an interesting approach to have something with next to no dialogue. Not often done, that I've seen, but it works for this piece, with just enough at the end to sort of ground you with their uncertain but very interested interaction.

I did enjoy too the way you expressed their thoughts regarding the other. How they initially weren't sure how to treat each other and eventually, the attraction that had been developing slowly just came to the forefront with a vengeance. keke Amber in a dress and Luhan in a suit. *flails* The mental imagery of the end gives me all sorts of happy feels. lol Thank you for sharing!
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