Don't Carelessly Love

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Please don’t give me that kind of stare.


Don’t carelessly talk about love that easily.


If you want to have my heart
,

Then you have to take all these pains too.

Because you’ll get wounded by these thorns.

~Lee Hi - Rose

Foreword

Part of a project for my creative writing class.

Hope you guys like this short one-shot and feedback is always welcome~

Thanks for taking a peek at my story!

~DespisedSecret

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travellingIdeas #1
Chapter 1: the character's emotion was described wonderfully. you bring the character to life by this nicely written story of yours. you got a new upvote hereu O u O
lkimgirl #2
Chapter 1: awesome. even though it's a short one, i really love it.
kai316 #3
Chapter 1: Awesome~ I saw this story at Octy08's fic recs and I was bored to I just clicked on it after reading about it. AND. I. DON'T. REGRET. IT.
This fic deserves so much more than the subbies and upvotes it got (Plus another one, from myself ;]) This is surely heartbreaking, but it is so true. Every human got it's thorns and you got to be deep in love to accept someone with sharp thorns. Once a person have fallen, they might not see the thorns but they still are there.
Anyways (A little off theme there) this is so intense that it's awesome I'm not sobbing my eyes out off feelings (Ew, thank god I am not. I look ugly while doing so ._.)
NerdForKpop7 #4
Chapter 1: you deserve more subscribers and upvotes for this one. great job (-:
princessamy #5
Chapter 1: i like this one shot of yours. it brings a very deep meaning behind it. i'm amazed... ^^
flutterwind #6
Chapter 1: Beautifully written! I love your writing style ^^
cocoaLuv #7
Chapter 1: i definitely am in a deep thought after reading this. I can really feel the emotion.. Honey you are really good on displaying emotions *standing ovation* ^^
Iluvbigbang123 #8
Chapter 1: This...
Is just so beautiful! I really like the way you write about love. It's just so deep and meaningful.
People nowadays think that dating is fun and all but most of them don't really know what it is to really fall in love.
To love a person means to share their burdens too I guess.
gimiko #9
Chapter 1: this is amazing.. i love your writing...
this made me thinking too, am i afraid to love again? or it is because of the pain?
but then i realise its about giving trust.....
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