Criminal Minds (Exo version)

Description

"To catch a criminal, you need to think like one"

 

"The Behavioral Analysis Unit consists of an elite team of FBI profilers who analyze the country's most twisted criminal minds and anticipate their next moves before they can strike again." the end.

 

This story is all about psychologycal battle between the BAU Agent ( profiler ) against the criminal with a mind no one can predicted. This is battle of minds.

In the story might be containing some words that you guys might not know.. I will explain in at the very end of every chapter that consist that words.

Hope you guys will enjoy this fanfiction ^_^

 

Don't you guys forget, there will be some romance^^, it's boyxboy.. so for you guys who doesn't like , you don't have to read this fic :)

Main Pairing : TaoRis <3

Slight BaekYeol, Kaisoo, and Hunhan <3

Foreword

Hey, you..

Hope you will enjoy reading this fanfiction :)

This is my very first fanfic..

 

Oh, I bet some of you guys know this TV movies, Criminal Minds, it's pretty popular in the USA.

I love their movies so much, that's why I want to rewrite it but not like the original version, so I change the original character with EXO members. 

Eventhough the characters Korean, the place setting is in USA :)

Hope this story won't be humiliating T_T

I'm sorry if there's any mistake about the grammars or my english orrr my story T_T..

English is not my native language T_T

 

The poster will coming out soon :D

 

AN. Criminal minds is not my works, it's belong to Jeff Davis T_T

 

 

pochirin
chapter one (edit) done :)

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WeiXiu #1
Woe ... There's another person with the username Wei Xiu ? Lol
jongkey57 #2
I love this showwww soooooo much and I'm so happy i stumbled upon this
WarQueen
#3
I loooove the show! Can't wait to read :)
mashisuh #4
Chapter 3: AHHH I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER... AND SOME HUNHAN :)
Hitachi
#5
When i was reading the foreword i kinda felt like this fic was dedicated to me XD. lolol, but i like this fic:3
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#6
Chapter 3: The latest chapter is good... But how to put this in words.. Hmmm /beingsomeawkwardlittleturtle *pursue my lips* 3rd pov is like you are writing an essay.. the longer that you write the more you put your reader on the edge of the cliff.. I advise you to read the popular author's works and tried to take some of their skill for your own good because I wanted to you be famous in aff although I'm not.. and besides, if you read the story again, believe me. you will feel stupid because I feel the same when I reread my first oneshot and story.. There are too much grammar and spelling mistake that I found in the stories.... Hope I don't sound harsh because it for your own good.. and my best friend told me that I have sharp tongue or should I call sharp fingers because I'm writing right now and I hope I didn't turned your spirit down because I really wanted to stick on your story until the end.. /sorry I don't like to give people advice in sugar-coated forms and expect me to comment on each of your chapter if I'm not too busy or I didn't see your story update.. and lastly.. Hwaiting.. ^^
OhLvhan
#7
Chapter 3: update soon please!!!! i can't wait for the other characers to pop out alredy xD

thanks for the update!!^^
merillion #8
Chapter 3: That fic is really a good idea. But I'd like to warn you about some shades about Tao's autism... in this second chapter he understands the other's emotions, but watch out: people with this syndrome aren't able to differentiate and understands emotions.
Hope to read more of this fic! c:
OhLvhan
#9
Chapter 2: and i forgot to mention that you used the office building from the movie xD

and i know this episode!!!! i can't wait to now who the unsub is!! xD

lol!! even saying unsub like a real profiler!! *gets excited by myself*
OhLvhan
#10
Chapter 1: thank God i'm finally able to open the chapter!!! woo hoooo!!! *throws confetti*

and since i'm a criminal mind freak, i see that you made some character based on the original character!!
i can see that tao is reid, luhan is garcia, leeteuk is gideon, and kris is hotchner if i'm not wrong xD but i don't know who the other are based on :(