Intricate Lines From A Broken Hymn

Description

Krystal/Kai ; Dystopian AU

Action / Sci-Fi / Romance

Current Word Count: 28,392 words~

Notes:

- advice to everyone who read the first version of this story: forget everything you first read.

- updates will be slow because i'm a writer who can't stick to my own plot line.

- this is a kaistal story. there is no love triangle. but we're not going to focus on the romance here.

- thank you to everyone who decided to wait for this story

for those interested on what books inspired me to write this, here's a list.

* The Hunger Games

* Divergent

* The Giver

if you like dystopian stories, i suggest you read them.

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mwohae #1 Jul 2, 2020 18:03:57

Chapter 20: i just found this story and this is very well written and i totally enjoyed it and the plot! i sincerely hope you would continue this story but knowing this story has been long abandoned, i can only hope but thank you for writing this story! :-)

Vanillabean88 #2 Feb 15, 2018 14:37:02

Please update this sooon Just found this and dying to know what happens next

littlehanridinghun #3 Jan 1, 2015 10:27:23

Chapter 20: finally jonginnn appeared again..gosh i miss kaistal interaction in this story..

wufaaaan #4 Dec 30, 2014 08:38:18

Chapter 20: I Miss thisssss bahhhh thanks for your update

shortlegged #5 Oct 21, 2014 06:45:47

Chapter 19: she's going to make an army for the war..
is yoona really dead? well,, according to jinah she did. bet oh well.. everything can happened.
im actually dying to see the appearance of jongin again~~
when will he came out? where was he?

ikrystal #6 Oct 11, 2014 08:49:33

Chapter 19: How much I miss this story.. I'm still curius about Yoona and I'm still curious about Kahi, what does she want?
If she said that to Sehun, Sehun did right not to forgive her
Btw, what Krystal mean by making perfect soldier?
Thx for the update, love it so much!!

mackrismore #7 Oct 10, 2014 23:26:55

Chapter 19: Whose conversation is that????? Where is jaejoong? Ugh how much I miss this storyy hahaha update soon:)

HoneyCates #8 Oct 9, 2014 11:19:42

Chapter 19: omg! thank you for this :)

Fellice #9 Sep 19, 2014 14:44:49

Chapter 18: One of my most awaited story finally has its update!!!
I really want to know what Kahi said to Sehun, she's so normal as a mother who hasn't met with her son for years. And also I'm interested about how the use the password n what will happen actually if they can't control it.. hey, thx for coming back n update soon ;) luv it♡
Btw in every end of the chapter you always put up something like in this chapter you put Yoona database n some other important notes , what is that mean? From whose point view?

HoneyCates #10 Sep 19, 2014 11:05:32

Chapter 18: I love it!! I wanna read more tho hahaha