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"so....how's your first day?do you like it here??"

"we can show you around..you know..you might get lost or something..."

Kyungsoo and Joonmyeon,the school's president and vice president,both were checking on the new girl and,they met her by coincidence in the library.

"girl??what's your name?"

"my name is Kyungsoo.Do Kyungsoo.I'm the President of the school"

"Kim Junmyeon.Vice president."

They offered her a friendly handshake after the intro,she took a look on those hands,and caught a glimpse of them in a cowardly manner.In a swift motion,she got up from the seat in between them,then walks away with the books she carrried along.

"hyung...did we do anything?how come she's so rude??"

"maybe it's her nature??"

People are curious about the new girl..she don't talk,don't smile,rude,rough,and....whatever you can see in a bad/worst character of a person.Some students even caught whispering and gossiping to each other whenever she passes by..

However,with the character like hers,is easily hooked by the baddies in the school..and so one day she was confronted by the gang's leader,Kim Songhee.

"unni..it's her..she's the one who broke our lockers..."

"she ran into us without saying sorry...."

"she drenched my clothes..."

And Boa did them..because those girls stole her things,treat her with ty attitudes whenever she asked them to return it in a nice way,call her names and stuff,brainwashed everyone to stay away from her,and pull dirty pranks on her.

and one day they made her run into them on purpose when she was running to class.

"Boa-ssi~"Songhee mimics a voice..

The moment when she turned her head,a bucket of water was splashed directly onto her face..and she was pushed harshly from the back until she tripped and fell.

Bad for her,there isn't anyone who walks by this hallway during this time.

Boa was left all alone,her whole body soaked in water,and GOD knows she was bruised on the knees,and she injured one of her elbows by accident..

 

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author-wannab
104 streak #1
will you update? the forward looks nice
nasomi2011 #2
Chapter 8: OK, now everything makes a lot more sense. This chapter provided a lot of necessary information. Thank you for the Update!
FarahStewart #3
Chapter 8: update soon!
nasomi2011 #4
Okay, so let me get things straight:

Kim Mina is the girl in question, right? The main OC. So, she just transferred to school from the states and lives alone. Baekhyun is her next-door-neighbor and her first friend. As he brings her to meet his friends, Yongguk and BAP intercept them. He is interested in Mina. However, there is a dark history between Yongguk and Baekhyun. Apparently, they dated the same girl, who we find out is Himchan's sister--

...Oh, wait. Kim Mina is HIMCHAN's sister. So,who is Daehyun's sister? The main OC? Now, I'm a bit confused. Let me just separate the two girls as Girl A (main OC) and Girl B (the ex). So, Yongguk and Baekhyun are currently interested in Girl A, who is Daehyun's sister? And their past together was due to Girl B who is Himchan's sister. She was not a very nice girl because she was obsessed over Yongguk. Therefore, she convinced people that he was mean and turned Baekhyun against him.

Okay, so I have a few questions: Were Yongguk and Baekhyun friends before or were they always rivals? How does Girl A feel about being bounced back and forth between EXO and BAP? Why does Girl A meet Baekhyun first instead of her "brother," Daehyun?

Anyway, I hope that my observations help! Just to let you know, I'm an English major and if you want to discuss anything with me, let me know!

Update whenever you are able! ^^
JiyahJay
#5
when you are going to update this?