here comes trouble...

Complexity

"hey baby.."

Boa noticed someone from her surroundings and she ignored it..but suddenly that someone poked his finger on her cheek.

"baby turn around for oppa.."He found that the words he used on her seems pretty cheesy to himself,and he wanted to laugh it out,but instead he held it in.

She turns around when he snorted,and he snorts even more with the look on her face..

"BABY WHERE ARE YOU GOING???"He chased after her as she fastens her pace..

"bab-"he stops immedeatly on his track with the presence of his stupid buddy..

"why are you on my way?aren't you with your sister by the way??'

"hyung...stop flirting around.someone's looking after you.."

Yongguk moves himself to the opposite direction and starts walking swiftly.

"OPPA~!!!!!!!!" "OPPA!WAIT~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"she was unable to catch up.

damn....

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Baekhyun was on his way to the library alone,and he saw a familiar view when he walks by the hallway.

It was the girl whom he had a crush on...and.....

who's that holding onto her arm?

He stood behind a wall watching them from far..

That guy...

clearly it was a guy who was trying to grab her for the second time when she yanked away from his grip earlier..he spoke something to her,and grab both of her arms this time..

Baekhyun sees that he has a firm grip on her by the way she tries to shake both the hands off her..and then..

she smacked him on the face with the book she was holding...

 

Mina came from the other direction,and clings herself onto the guy.She touches his face and kissed his cheek.

 

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author-wannab
104 streak #1
will you update? the forward looks nice
nasomi2011 #2
Chapter 8: OK, now everything makes a lot more sense. This chapter provided a lot of necessary information. Thank you for the Update!
FarahStewart #3
Chapter 8: update soon!
nasomi2011 #4
Okay, so let me get things straight:

Kim Mina is the girl in question, right? The main OC. So, she just transferred to school from the states and lives alone. Baekhyun is her next-door-neighbor and her first friend. As he brings her to meet his friends, Yongguk and BAP intercept them. He is interested in Mina. However, there is a dark history between Yongguk and Baekhyun. Apparently, they dated the same girl, who we find out is Himchan's sister--

...Oh, wait. Kim Mina is HIMCHAN's sister. So,who is Daehyun's sister? The main OC? Now, I'm a bit confused. Let me just separate the two girls as Girl A (main OC) and Girl B (the ex). So, Yongguk and Baekhyun are currently interested in Girl A, who is Daehyun's sister? And their past together was due to Girl B who is Himchan's sister. She was not a very nice girl because she was obsessed over Yongguk. Therefore, she convinced people that he was mean and turned Baekhyun against him.

Okay, so I have a few questions: Were Yongguk and Baekhyun friends before or were they always rivals? How does Girl A feel about being bounced back and forth between EXO and BAP? Why does Girl A meet Baekhyun first instead of her "brother," Daehyun?

Anyway, I hope that my observations help! Just to let you know, I'm an English major and if you want to discuss anything with me, let me know!

Update whenever you are able! ^^
JiyahJay
#5
when you are going to update this?