saranghae , jaejoong-ssi ( ONE SHOT)

Description

Park Jina :

- she is a beautiful girl

- 21 yo , she is graduation from University of Seoul with management accounting

- she is jaejoong's girl .

 

Kim Jaejoong :

- Pretty boy

- One of dbsk member

- jina's boyfriend

Foreword

Park Jina and Jaejoong dated about 1 year ago , they met at small coffee shop, Jina is did something in her laptop , Jaejoong who sit not far from her staring his eyes to Jina . Jina is so pretty that day, she wore a white dress look like fairy .  Jaejoong felt that he want to know her deepest. And then he introduce himself to Jina , as soon as , jaejoong confesses his love and they are be a couple , but ...

Back to Top ↑

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
NappeunYeoja #1
Pretty good one :)
Asian_Innocence #2
I had trouble reading sometimes because of the grammar, but the plot was so interesting, I had to read it through. =)
brigitteanncastro #3
Liked it!
YunhoRulz #4
your writing's actually not bad - it's just that your tense can really mess your sentence structures up lols. don't worry, a LOT of people have problems with that. <br />
I really liked this by the way - for some reason, when i stumble across a JaeJoong one-shot or story, it's always sad lols, and i like sad stories, like this one. it was really sweet for Jae to honestly tell the whole world about Jina - I wouldn't have done that if i were him lols, which makes him such a great person to be with... poor Jina. R.I.P.
heeJinaa #5
Thanks for the comment unnie , i will try my best :) but i'm apologize if the next chapter not like as you want , unnie .
JaeSica4Ever #6
update soon,i'm very interested to know what will happen next
Back to Top ↑