Soldier 2014

Escape to Redemption

 

 

 

 

  “Okay, okay, for the thousandth time,” he sighed, “No one’s coming in here.”

Minho fidgeted, his eyes continuously flittering to the door, just waiting for someone to pop in. He couldn’t trust anyone outside—he hardly trusted this guy, but if he was going to tell him about Taemin, he had to let it go.

  “Hey,” the guy shoved at his bare shoulder good naturedly, “Believe me, if I knew someone would be coming, I wouldn’t stay and wager my life, to be honest. Can I go on?”

Minho wanted no more than to move on, to talk, but the distraction of getting caught stuck to him, and he was afraid he’d get them both in heaps of trouble neither of them would ever want.

  “Why won’t they come?” Minho asked, trying to reassure himself.

The guy smiled, rubbing his shoulder, “I know a guy.”

Minho squeezed his eyes shut and sighed, swiping a hand across his eyes before he could claim himself as calm, “Okay, Okay.”

  “Good,” the other smiled widely, patting Minho’s shoulder, “Now—”

  “About Taemin.”

The guy kept up his smile, nodding his head, continuing to pat his shoulder as if he were a good little brother, “Please don’t be disappointed when I say I didn’t see him, but heard. I wanted nothing more but to see him, I tell you.”

Minho quickly shook his head, inching closer to the man, getting eager about Taemin’s wellbeing, “Please tell me everything you know.”

  “He’s okay, to say the most,” he started out, “But you know he has to be scared of what he saw. Even the toughest men here get scared of these things—I, I didn’t mean to call you thing! No, I meant like . . . um, like, how it all happened! I swear I didn’t mean it the other way!”

Minho slightly smiled at the man’s overcautious behavior and shook his head again, looking him in the eyes with a small eye smile, “I get what you mean. Go on.”

The man, relieved, settled himself before taking his hand away and joining it with his other hand, “I mean, he’s not just afraid of you transforming or you and the Intellude fighting, but the Intellude threatening him—I mean, am I right? You did mention that before, slash, it was kind of obvious. And also just . . . watching a being die right in front of his eyes.

  “Kapsoo said he hadn’t spoken a word on the way back to Namwon. Taemin couldn’t even manage to make it half a step through his house’s front door. Kapsoo couldn’t even push him in.”

Minho turned rigid. The apartment he and Taemin lived in and Taemin couldn’t even take a step inside anymore. He felt incredibly sick to his stomach because of what this has done to him. If only he kept control, if only Taemin had kept his eyes shut . . .

  “As of now, Taemin’s still in Namwon, but it’s rumored he should be coming here at some point. Kapsoo said he was a boy who . . .” the man’s eyes slightly turned somber, “. . . Who couldn’t let go, but held on to everything tightly. Kapsoo . . . he wants to do his best to ‘help’ Taemin. But you don’t want that.”

Minho furrowed his brows, staring at the man in confusion as to how the guy thinks he wouldn’t want Taemin relieved of worry or fear, “Why not?”

The man looked down, toying with his hands before his lips parted, “They’ll rid you of his memories. They’ll make him forget.”

Minho instantly jumped up, eyes bugging out, his skin getting uncomfortably tight, something erupting in his chest, and it was unsettling, “N-no! Tae can’t! They . . . They can’t!”

  “H-hey!” the guy yelled, jumping further away from Minho, “Control yourself! You’ve got white pulsing off your skin! Don’t get upset now! Calm down!”

Think of a tree and be its healing roots. . .

Minho shook violently, forcing himself to stop the beast within, containing the white fury that played on they tips of his fingers. No, he couldn’t lose himself now. Not yet. This wasn’t even close to the time he should.

Think of a tree and be its healing roots. . .

He still had time. He could stop this one way or another. He could change this.

Yet again . . . maybe Taemin wanted to forget. Maybe this was too much of burden for him to live with. Being without Minho could help him live easier, to forget their relationship, to forget their time spent together.

And for Minho, it’d be a shame he wouldn’t be able to see his blond boy again.

  “Ah . . .” Minho held his head, feeling a headache arising and pulsing, “I didn’t do it right this time.  Damn it . . . Ah . . .”

The man on the mattress sighed, “I see you’ve got a headache.”

  “, it really hurts this time,” Minho felt cold again, sitting back down and leaning on the wall, “I lost my cool way too quick.”

  “Yeah, well, don’t become a fireball so suddenly ever again or I might have to stun you,” the man teased, even though it was a wrong time to do so, Minho still found humor in it.

  “I guess you’ll need sleep now; I can come back sometime when my shift switches,” he said, slightly getting off the mattress, “A-Actually, I know a way to get rid of—well, minimize—your headache. If you’d like me to . . .”

Minho didn’t even open his eyes, “Please tell me you aren’t going to trick me, now.”

  “No,” he solemnly swore, “I really know a method. And you need sleep before SangJung makes it a hard day for you. It might even help you sleep, for all I know.”

Minho wanted to hit himself for not calming down correctly; the way Seunghyun always taught him how to do and learned to never fail.

Think of a tree and be its healing roots.

Minho accidentally thought of a tree catching fire instead.

And now, of all times, of all places, he decided to screw up the technique and add to his list of problems.

  “Knock yourself out.”

The man chuckled, “I might knock you out.”

  “Just don’t get all touchy-feely with me. I don’t like being ,” Minho added, at the moment, not sure if he was joking or being serious.

  “Oh darn, my plan has been foiled,” the man sarcastically remarked, “Get off the wall and face your back to me.”

Minho followed his instructions, smiling just a bit, “Now it really sounds like—”

  “Shut up,” he laughed, “And tilt your head down.”

It seemed they were too close in what could’ve been a friendship in such little time. It felt wrong in so many ways for Minho, but laying on top of that feeling . . . it just felt like it should make sense. Like he was meant to know him. Like he did know him.

Minho tilted his head down, letting the man’s hands place to the sides of his head, his thumbs press to the two dips below his skull and above his neck, gently rolling his thumbs in circles.

  “You’re going to feel pressure,” he warned, “But once I let go, it feels like weight came off your shoulders.”

Minho hummed, barely paying attention to the words, his focus on his thumbs, the pressure slightly building in his head. It felt odd, suffocating almost; like his head was being closed in. But he could feel less and less of the strikes of pain to his forehead, and that’s all he cared for.

  “What’s your name?” Minho sighed out, indeed feeling sleepy like the man warned before.

  “O-Onew,” he stuttered, “I’m Onew. Soldier two-thousand-and-fourteen to SangJung, unfortunately.”

  “Onew . . .” Minho tasted the words, ending up in a garbled mess as he became more and more hazy, “I need Taemin. I need . . . to keep him . . . safe. You know what I . . . mean? Safe . . . That’s what I want for him, Onew. All . . . I want.”

The gentle thumb kneads grew softer and smaller in rotation, the rest of Onew’s hands letting go of his head, “I hear you, Minho. I get it. I get what you want. It’ll happen somehow, I promise.”

The thumbs disconnected from Minho’s head and he felt this large wave of pressure descend from him, no longer present, no longer any pain.

Haze and sleepiness. That’s what there was.

  “You’ve been sleeping without a blanket,” Onew sighed disapprovingly, “You never even looked close enough at the mattress. It has a zipper to the inside. It’s full of blankets. Lie down, Minho.”

Minho obeyed the order, his eyelids too heavy to keep open. He could hear an actual zip through his ears, and the mattress lifted up a little bit.

Then he felt warmth and softness.

Like Taemin.

Onew wrapped the blanket around him as if he were a toddler, taking special care to cover his feet and shoulders.

  “Taemin,” Minho sighed out.

  “We’ll fix it, Minho,” Onew responded, patting his hair, “Taemin will do just fine. He’s a strong man, I know.”

Minho didn’t even let himself stay awake to answer him.

 

 

 

----Note~----

Hi. c:

More or so, this was a filler, sorry about that. >.>

I just think Onew's introduction should've had it's own chapter. I swear these'll be longer again.

I only aim for chapters to be six pages, because I think people would lose interest if I do my usual twelve. 

I wanted to say I'd upate tomorrow too, but I don't have many written chapters left, and I need to work on those, so yeah, a short one this week. :\

I have nothing much to say, so yup. Hope you have a nice weekend.

Thank you to all views, comments, and subs. <3

~FlaMinhoe

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TGIntent
#1
Would you believe me if i told you that i found your fic on livejournal first? I was actually looking through listings of old 2min fics when i stumbled onto your lj. I only read up to chapter 11 or 12 when it ended and thats when I saw the aff link on one of your post. I'll be sure to finish reading it then :)
booklover333 #2
Chapter 36: One of the best stories I have ever read. Seriously well-thought and a great plot with a lot of plot twists that were just right. Love this story!!!!!
eunhaeshipper15 #3
Chapter 36: I was literally procrastinating reading your updates because I didn't want it to end ;A; BUT I COULDN'T DO IT ANYMORE AND WOAHLY CRUD DO I FEEL LIKE CRYING. I've loved this story so much and there is so much attachment to it just as a reader. It must be even worse for you xD There were lots of subtle hints and clever events that weaved their way into the story. Plots twists and cliffhangers that just hit me right in the face. This was an incredible story with an amazing author and I am SOOO glad I found it~~~ I hope you continue writing and am one of your fans :D
((btw I screamed when I saw my username in your a/n))
THOSE AREN'T TEARS WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT.
kara224 #4
Author i looved your story. It was perfect and u had me at the edge of me seat constantly. I love taemin but at times i wished he realized minho wasnt bad. Im glad it was a happy ending. Thanku :)
Bored0ut0fHerMind
#5
Chapter 36: Yehey!!! You had me going there with Onew and Luna! I'm like, they can't be dead, no no no!
Great job! This has been a fix that I was really glad I waited every chapter for. It was worth the wait and I'm gonna miss it!!!
dat_azian_gull #6
Chapter 33: I knew it... I was suspicioud from the start that they were brother... your predicitive authornim (bwo! Just kidding XD) lubbs u
CarrotOmNomNom
#7
Chapter 36: I am so upset. This story is so good and I've read everything in a couple of hours with a history paper to do 6 hours from now I am severely upset.
The story is so good. The characters and plot. God how brilliant can this story get?
iluvcutestuffandidky
#8
Chapter 36: omg i cried sooooooooooooooooo hard when i reached taemins bday
like you do not know
cuz onew and luna
i was scared theyd realy be deaad
but then bom said to be excited
and i couldnt stop crying until they seriously appeared
like
/legit bawls eyes out again/
and im gonna miss this story
followed you ever since livejournal to aff
and now its done like
/cries again/
im gonna miss this story too
ranting againbut i just love this story so much
i dont want it to end yet i knew it is the end
so sad
lemme go cry in a corner now before i keep on ranting
kay bye
iluvbubbles_yay #9
Chapter 36: Oh my gosh, can't believe it's actually finally over ;; It's been a wonderful journey! The ending is brilliant. I'd been hoping so bad that Onew & Luna had actually survived by some weird mechanism, & then when they saw the videotape & it was all finAL AND LIKE THE NAIL IN THE COFFIN THEY'RE DEAD I WAS TEARING UP. Lots ;; (& then I teared up again later at a related happening I was so glad & happy & relieved and emotional just ;;;;;;)

In fact, reading this whole last chapter and then this epilogue has just made me very emotional. It's over ;; (except for that last bit of the BTS)I hope Jongkey did indeed make it together in the afterlife. ;; They deserve to be happy forever & ever after all their trials & tribulations, as do the other 5 as well ofc!

When Minho looked at Seunghyun's carvings too, realising all the relevant events in there, idk, I just thought that was a really interesting detail, I love how you threw Taemin's birthday party their too lmao! xD And then afterwards and someone arrived and I was like no no nonono this surely can't be truth don't be cruel get my hopes up like this yES yesyesyesyesss it isss ;;; I'm sorry you just wrote the whole line surrounding a certain 2 characters (well all of them really but these 2 had me on the edge of my seat (well i was reading in bed... so figuratively :P) throughout these last chapters)
And then Minho's reaction to the upcoming event ah so cute akjfhj & yayayay for their futures :3
I'm incredibly sorry to hear about your cat :/ I know it won't really help but I'm sending you hugs :/ <3

I'm very grateful to you that you managed to finish it ^^ I'm sorry this was a very messy comment with very little structure, but just these last 2 chapters are ;; Very well done. You've completed an amazing story, I wish there were more like this on here, with such original (slightly fantasy-y) story ideas and complicated plot and beautifully crafted characters. For the last time on this story (;;) thank you for updating! ^^
moonlightangel77 #10
Chapter 36: *sniff sniff*so beautiful! Claps one of the best stories! Definately upvoting! Luna and Onew didn't die! One of the best 2min Lunew Jongkey fanfics ever! Please make another one! ...still crying...