Prince Of Thieves

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{The Prince of Thieves}

There once lived a king, Siwon, who was a terrible sadist and enjoyed to see his people suffer. Man,many people hated him. The king had a brother,Suho who was hypnotised to go on a battle and until now, no one knew what happened to him. Was he safe? Will he come back? 

With the hope that the Suho would come back and save them from his evil brother, the people continued to live in terror.

That was until, Kai came along. Just like Robin hood, he robbed from the rich and gave it to the poor expecting nothing in return from them.

Kai swore to stay loyal to his best friend Suho and until he returns, Kai would be the one who helps the needy and poor.

(A/N} Sorry for making the bad king Siwon, It's just that siwon and suho looks alike. Mianhe to all Siwon lovers from SJ!)

Foreword

-Kai(Jongin)
The most handsomest robber/thief you will ever find.
Disguised himself as a fortune teller to get close to the rich but telling them their 'futures'.
Very loyal to his friends.
Loves- Archery, swordsplay, helping out the poor, singing and dancing.
Hates- Siwon(The bad king)

 


Luhan

Same ambition as Kai and is also very loyal to Suho.

Helps Kai with the fortune telling and while he tells the fortune,Kai goes for the steal.

Has fun running away from guards and loves to come up with plans, ideas and pranks etc to trick the guards.

Fell in love with Kai's first love.

Likes- To set up traps for guards and equally skilled at swordsplay.

Hates- When his plans goes wrong and has to use plan B.Siwon too.

-Kim Taeyon

-Kai's first love and also has a crush on Kai.

 

-Is only loyal to Kai alone.

 

-Has a temper but usually very calm

 

Loves to play around with things that are able to shoot .

 

Hates- to be told what to do.

-Siwon

A MEGA SADIST

Has a tiny crush on Taeyon

Likes wars

Hates Kai, Luhan, Suho and many,many more-  including his god damn brother,Suho

SUHO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-Very cute and bubbly. He's smile is enough to turn a frown upside down.

Loves his comrades and friends.

Very Loyal to the people he cares for.

Never like war.

The complete opposite of Siwon.

-Like to draw 

Hates- seeing his people suffer

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This story will somehow be like Robin Hood but, BUT there will be a twist! Whoopie! I love twists!

And also Gomawao for taking ur time to read this! This is my first fanfic but I hope that you will enjoy it! 

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Awesome poster by Angelic Love Graphics by anghel0211~~~ 

Credits to FRY EXO Trailer graphics shop for the awesome TRAILER SARANGHAE~~~

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babymaybesone #1
Chapter 7: NICE!
Update soon..
Boombyeby123 #2
Chapter 7: Ooooo! Thanks for the update!
I wonder if Luhan or KAi is going to do it.
Are you going to have the competition be like the traditional story of Robin Hood and have it be a bow shooting contest? Or no?
Boombyeby123 #3
Chapter 5: Oh! And thanks for the update. :)
Boombyeby123 #4
Chapter 5: Ahaha, I might be stupid, but I just noticed the poster! :D I like it!
Gah. If I were them, I'd be wonderstruck too! Taeyeon is gorgeous!
Boombyeby123 #5
Chapter 4: OOOOOooooooooooooooOOOO!
What's going to happen NEXT? :O
Who's going to retrieve that arrow?
OR MAYBE, did it puncture someone? That'd be bad, lol.
Thanks for the update, SunnyGoddess! I can't wait for the next one.
Oh, and Baekhyun and Chen got Sehun Make-up? Ahaha! xD
Boombyeby123 #6
Hello, you had said that comments were good, and I just wanted to suggest that you should say WHY the people wanted Suho. Why do the people wait for Suho? Maybe mention that Suho is amazing or something? That he has been known to be the nice guy? Something. And maybe something more about the plot? All I get from the foreword (which is what I only read) is that Siwon is a sadist and his people like Suho better... Okay, what about it? What about them living in terror and that Kai helps steal things for the poor? What is this going to be about? Is it two stories combined? Kai and Suho's? Or is it all aobut Robin Hood? Or is it about a prince who wants his rightful throne back? Who is the main dude? Kai? If it is, why is Suho's story included? Or at least included BEFORE Kai's. And Luhan and Taeyeon are before Suho, which I had thought Suho would be the main. (In Character Descrips.) Also, why isn't Suho coming back? Why isn't he stopping Siwon from doing all of these bad things? Explain his situation.
Sorry if I was harsh, but I just wanted to comment. :D
Otherwise, it seems like you've got a good story going!
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