A Coincidence Of A Lifetime

Description

You just got in a fight with your parents, and left for the night. Ready for a lonely night of traveling on the subway. But someone happens to be there, but to give you company or intrude in your space?

 

Foreword

This is my absolute first fanfic, so I hope I did okay. ^^

Feedback, comments, or ANYTHING is greatly appreciated~

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this!! *^^*

<3-Minji

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Xoxflyxox #1
Chapter 2: This is adorable. Its well written and so sweet~!! I love it sooooo much~! You should write more!
daejunmi #2
Chapter 2: OMG I LOVE THIS YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW LONG I SPENT LOOKING FOR A GOOD AND SIMPLE FANFIC OF A ZELOXYOU. I ALMOST STOPPED LOOKING. Let me tell you how good this was.... I was so near to crying because of this. I would have cried but my mom called me AND THE TEARS STOPPED OMFG. I was so mad lmao. T.T It's so real, I think that's what made it so good. Because I can relate to this in a way and it's simple enough to be imagined. AND I JUST LOVE IT OMG THANK YOU AUTHOR-NIM. I AM SATISFIED. (▰˘◡˘▰)
ch3nya #3
Chapter 2: This was just so good i loved it!
cupcake7660 #4
Chapter 2: It was soooo cute
XD XD XD XD XD
xxamytjeexx #5
Chapter 2: Wow love love LOVE your story youre a pro! :D
hcaticha #6
Chapter 2: Zelo is so mature in this! Exactly how i imagine him :3 but i guess he would be to shy to talk to a random girl on the subway... But we can dream, right? Such a cute story
-serena #7
Chapter 2: It's rare to see Zelo being portrayed as such a mature, sensible boy. He's usually all fluffy and nuna~ hyung~ Oh you know what I mean, the Zelo stereotype in fanfics. He's a freaking jail bait but he's so endearing I can't help but love him, and love him all the more after reading this fic. Great writing and characterizing, though the OC's attitude did threw me off at first. I don't really enjoy the whole awkward yelling thing.
MitsuKyuYamazaki #8
Chapter 2: XD argh it's so fluffy~
I'm melting now~
Great job ^^
rainbow-lighter #9
so cute >//////< i love this fic author-ssi!! the mature side of zelo <3 loooove this!!
obliviate- #10
Chapter 2: That was so damn cute jodhfpshig I love it~
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