Crushing on LuHan, the Thief

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Crushing on LuHan, the Thief 

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"Congratulations... to our Graduates!"

This was it. It was the start of a brand new life for you.

Your dream of job was just a few steps away, and nothing was going to stop you from it. But one day, a strange group of six boys comes in. They were handsome and charming, although there was one thing that made them stand out from the rest...

 

"From now on, you're one of us!"

 

"Of all people, why does it have to be me?"

 

It just so happens that a boy named Lu Han, a handsome and baby-faced boy, is chosen to be your guide.

He's pretty much everything a girl could ever dream of;

except for that attitude of his.

 

Nevertheless, you are forced to agree to become a part of their group. If not, well... it would mean some painful consequences.

But things weren't going to be a piece of cake with Lu Han watching your every move.

 

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  Choi Hye Rim  

~19 years old

~Determined and independent

~Doesn't like to ask for other's help

~A goody-two shoes who only fights for the right causes.

~Innocent, but can be hot tempered sometimes.

 

Lu Han

~A 22 year old flower boy

~Agressive and impulsive

~Can be harsh and rude at times

~Has a soft-spot for some people, mainly for those who are needy.

~Can be a gentleman sometimes eventhough he doesn't realize it.

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SelcyMorimoto #1
Chapter 4: OMG~ this is so serious! I really like this fic! Update soon pls!
LuDeerHan #2
Chapter 4: Aish, why does Lu Han have to be so snobby :P I hope they get together well! I love your poster by the way!
Dian821
#3
Chapter 4: I'm really looking forward to this story and the interaction between her & Luhan~ keep up the good work:)
Haerui
#4
Awesome story! Update soon~
LOVINGmaBOY #5
Chapter 2: Hello, I'm here to read, maybe subscribe and comment which might turn into a slight review :)

Okay let's start of with saying how I liked your description, it was really well put and honestly I don't think there is anything that I can fault. You have an excellence use in english and I love the way you spaced each paragraph out.
Also your character descriptions was good and I liked how you tried to not give out much so your, but enough for your readers to have an idea on what kind of personality each characters have.
From your introduction I was intrigued into wanting to carry on reading, which rarely happens to me.

Chapter 1
Oh my, your start is excellent on the urge of perfection! I've never read a first chapter that has good vocabulary and punctuation. Your paragraph length is really long, some people will love (like me) and some people will not, but do not get discouraged by that:) because the people that hates reading long chapters are probably lazy and is missing out on a good fanfic!
A very good first chapter, seriously! I am so jealous at your writing skills!

Chapter 2
After chapter 1 I had high expectations for the format of the rest of your story and you've managed to reach my expectation! Very good way of leaving spaces in between and bold-ing of words makes it clear to all the readers (:
Wow! Can't believe there is no misspellings or anything :o very happy to see that.

Overall I like; wait no I LOVE your unique plot and your standard in English is definitely a big bonus.
Most people make minor spelling mistakes but you didn't which is a even bigger bonus! Who would want to read a story that has bad spellings?

This story has potential to be excellent.
I can't wait for your update! I will continue reading, in the time being, remember to update as soon as possible. This is a way to keep the subscribers on-going.

P.S. If I've subscribed to your fanfic that means I like it and I want to carry on reading, so don't stop updating :)
KungfuPanda_Tao
#6
OMG is she going to meet Lu Han now? haha great chappie!
TaeminnieDance
#7
Please do well on this fic. The plot looks kind of strange though, I'm looking forward in seeing how you approach it!
shineeworld-
#8
Looks interesting! Haha can't wait to read it~