Of Way Too Sweet Coffees and Drumsticks

Description

Chanyeol stared.
And he, in his opinion, had all the available rights of the world to stare.
It wasn’t everyday you get introduced to the, for Chanyeol, hottest guy on earth. Or maybe on mars, since there are still some weird people who call themselves scientists and somehow believe there are human like creatures living there.
But however, there was this superhot guy standing right in front of him, smiling his ridiculously attractive smile and probably waiting for a reply to his previous words, which were something like:
“Nice to meet you, my name is Wu YiFan and I am going to be your the new CEO of EXO-M Music Entertainment from now on. Please take good care of me from now on Chanyeol-sshi.”

Foreword

Hello my fellow Exo fans ^-^
This is actually the first fan fiction I've ever published, so I would be grateful to receive some feedback!
It could be something like: Your writing style , dude D:
to something like: OMKRISUS this is awesome asdfghjkl
As long as it helps me to improve my writing style/story.
Thank you in advance ^^
(And if you don't like something, please write what exactly you don't like ^^)
So, I think it's pretty obvious but I'll say it anyway:

This story contains boyxboy//maleslash or whatever you want to call it, so if you don't like it or if you are not comfortable with this kind of story, please leave since you won't like my story then ^^
However, I don’t know how many people actually DO read the foreword, so I’ll stop now and I hope you’ll enjoy reading this as much as I have fun writing it ^^

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ThatOneOtherWriter
#1
work on your spacing. otherwise it's an interesting read.
ZO9ZO9
#2
Chapter 1: I don't want to hassle or rush you but will this be updated soon? you're first chapter is absolutely golden and I would love to read more!
ing
#3
Chapter 1: your style is nice, since you put some possible scenarios and it makes the story more funny~
and yep yep, only change chef to chief, that's all~<3
see u~
suibian
#4
Chapter 1: The plot is nice so as Chanyeol's weird imagination >:)

btw chef = the one who cooks
I think you mean
Chief = the head of an organisation ....^^;;
joonie97
#5
great ^^