Your Warmth

Description

Elvin angst

Kevin's POV

um, enjoy? :3

 

 

credits-

To these pretty ladies : 
ainnurdoongie
byul_mi

Thank you so much ^^ You guys help a lot :D

 

 

Author's Note

No tissues required, 
And everyone in this one shot is not fiction and not mine, the story is.
I am sorry with my writing skills, it is not getting any better.
My English as well, I hope you can understand it.
MY GRAMMAR OF COURSE. haha :P
Please leave some comment so I can improve ^^
Upvote if you want. Thank you :D

 

Foreword

 

“Stop it, Kevin! Just stop! He’s gone!” 

Ki Seop yelled, and his eyes were almost out from its socket. 

“Ki Seop,” 

I directed my gaze to the leader who comes from nowhere, and Jae Seop is standing behind him. I bet they were shock with Ki Seop’s voice.

“Tell him hyung, tell him Eli is gone. Tell him Eli died because he fell from the rooftop edge! Tell him he should move on!” 

Ki Seop shouted, not even a word he slow his voice down. Soo Hyun hyung is looking at me now, and his face is full of worry and sympathy. He whispers something to Jae Seop before the Kitty nodded understands.

“Kevin, can we talk?”

I don’t know what Ki Seop said next, but I just shook my head and get up from my bed. I walk passing them, and almost hit Hoon as he is on his way to my room. I ran as fast as I can, leaving the house, ignoring Soo Hyun hyung calls and Hoon’s begging, asking me to stop. And there is only one place in my mind.

The rooftop.

 

 

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hasanaheart
#1
Chapter 1: I have read this story and I wonder why I haven't subscribed this. GOD, I like it!! but the ending is kinda sad ㅠㅠ
pillowheart
#2
Chapter 1: IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL BUT OH MY GOD, MY HEART. MY ELVIN SHIPPER HEART. I CAN'T....THIS IS TOOSAD BUT i LIKE IT SOOO BOOKMARKED! ☺ ♥
Annie27 #3
Chapter 1: T________T
beautiful yet so sad T_T
natranyel #4
this is good !!! 5 thumbs up for the writer XD at first i just feel like wanna to laughing but when elvin part is coming .. suddenly its turn to sad feeling n i just cant hold my tears .. especially at the almost last part .. arghh . i really dont want eli die even its just fanfic only because i love him too . lol . ok thats all my comment . anyway this fanfics way too good . well done to the writer. keep it up ^^
kemaru1437 #5
Chapter 1: It must be very hard for Kevin, seeing someone he loves die in front of him. And he's also the reason Eli committed suicide (since he's feeling depressed that people are comparing the both of them).

Reading that one part when Eli said he's not talented enough make me cry. I don't know, I just had a weak spot for something like that (when someone in an idol group said they're basically useless(?) in their group) :'(
But I can't help but laugh when Kevin called Eli his Pigeon. (sorry Kevin) XD
The ending is sweet. Glad that they still ended up together. ^^
sarangxpabo
#6
Chapter 1: It was extremely good! TT (other than the grammar but I guess that can be corrected? :3)
SulHwa #7
Chapter 1: I loved it, made me cry a little bit :D
Alichia
#8
Chapter 1: Applauds! This is probably the best one shot I've read!
bootylicker
#9
Chapter 1: That was really good!!! I liked it a lot! A good angst one shot I read. I really enjoyed reading it. (^^;)b

Really good. I know you feel bad about your writing but this is good. You can come ask a native English speaker, like me, if you want to correct the English. And description is good. Could use some more description but other than that, awesome!