Lady in the Middle of the Night

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Author's Note

This is a little bit like Taiyo no Uta ^0^ I just like the plot so I took some bits but I do not copy it... I just took the illness xD

Lol sad story I wish ^^ Not use writing sad story ㅠ.ㅠ

 

Ahn Maerin is just a simple girl who wish to see the beauty of sunlight but she is strictly not allowed to do so because she 

have an illness that cannot be exposed in the sun.

She is the younger sister of Ahn Daniel, who is he? None other than the Emotional Vocalist of Teen Top, he never knew 

your illness because you request to your parent to never tell him or anything.

You really want to spend your time with your brother just then your mum talk to Mr. Andy yes the CEO of the company

your brother in. 

They let you live there with them  but plead not to tell them that you are Daniel's dongsaeng and unexpectedly fall in love to the

mischievous rapper.

Sooner or Later you know it's your Time. TT.TT

She was close to her brother until that incident she decided to stay away from her brother.

 

 

-Ahn Maerin (You)

-Sweet, Shy and Sefless

-17 (18 in 5th August)

Maerin is a sweet, shy and selfless girl but one thing is she never had a friend her only friend was her big Brother but

until the incident came she decided not to bother him and now her brother Daniel is an Idol from Teen Top.

She love Singing and Dancing but never should it to people since the only people she know is her family and relatives.

-Ahn Daniel

-Kind, Sweet and Cold Toward You

-Daniel or so called 'Niel' is Kind and sweet but towards you he is cold. It was because of the incident  when you were

14 when his girlfriend got into accident and got coma until then he decided to not talk to you or do anything with you.

You also avoided him since then. Curious about you.

-Lee Byunghun aka L.Joe

-Cool, Mysterious and Bad Temper

-Your First crush and love when you saw him in T.V. He stayed in States for 5 years. He is rather describe as cool, mysterious

but also has a bad temper side. He is kind to those people who're close to him like his band mates.

 

-Teen Top - As usual ^0^

-Kim JinHee - Niel's girlfriend in Coma - She hates you until she discovered your illness becomes your sister-like and only friend

-Han MinKi - Laterz About her xD *spoiler* She is a xD

Foreword

 

Arts by: GeekReader

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NFTeenFinite #1
It is a very sad story...I'd cry a lot when I read it..Thank you for this story author nim....
ABoyWhoCriedWolf #2
Chapter 9: this is a very touching story :) Good jOb aUthOrNim ..:-)
ABoyWhoCriedWolf #3
new reader here :-) i like the plot ..and i'll look forward with it :-)
Earringloverz #4
Chapter 10: Wow couldn't stop myself from cryingTT-TT
shai209 #5
Chapter 8: First story reading that I actually cried!!! Amazing story! Upvoted! While reading I actually felt likr I was the oc! O.O. amazing story again!!!!!
minhoshawols #6
I love this!!!!
evilminic00kies #7
Chapter 10: Story was amazing. Omfg I couldnt stop crying. Format and sentences were a bit weird, but the overall plot was beautiful. Asdfghjkl cant contain all them feels.
xyper_crash21 #8
Chapter 8: 1. Foreword - 90/100
The foreword is well written, but there were some grammatically wrong sentences and the sad feeling of the description was kind of off-tracked because of “TT.TT”. One picture wasn’t working, I suggest you change it. And in “…is a sweet, shy and selfless girl”, what do you mean by selfless? Nevertheless, I got the plot of the story in the foreword. Good job! ^.^
2. Pictures - 98/100
As I said, one picture isn’t working(Maerin’s picture) and about the poster… It kind of didn’t match the story’s sad plot, it looked more of a happy one.
3. Story Plot - 99/100
Wah, the plot made me cry. Like really, cry. Everyone will cry at the ending. Your story also has a hidden advice on everyone, and the fact that Maerin never gives up on her oppa is heartwarming.

4. Grammar - 85/100
Your grammar was kind of off track. First, you keep changing the perspective from 1st person point of view to 3rd person point of view even though you clearly said “Eomma’s POV”, etc. Then, sometimes you have wrong spelling, not much, only a little. Then some missing words, so your score was a bit low.

5. Writing Style – 90/100
Your writing style was okay, though there were sentences cut and the next part of it was in another paragraph. I suggest you try and fix it ^^

6. Total markings – 92.4/100
Yay! Congratulations! Just work on your grammar and it will be perfect! Sorry if the review took so long, I decided I’ll do it ‘cause Iyah took so long ^^” No hard feelings! Thanks for choosing ~~~BUTTER REVIEW SHOP!~~~
Solution96 #9
Chapter 9: I cried really hard and i think about niel as her bf not brother lol! :)
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