Deception :: The Act of Conning — { revamping }

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They were normal girls with seemingly normal lives. Who would've known they were famous underground for something seemingly horrible? They've done it all from stealing someone's identity to killing someone ruthlessly. They've never worked with anybody else but their selected few within the mafia. Assigned to work together, they became the ideal team.
deception
the act of conning
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the
info
TITLE. Deception
AUTHOR(S). -catalyst, -lightsaber
GENRE(S). Action, drama, romance, possible fluff, possible rated scenes
RATING. for obvious reasons
FEATURING. BAP, selected EXO members plus Kris/Wu Yifan, chosen applicants as mafia/government members
INSPIRATION. My mind, BAP's music video "One Shot"
DISCLAIMER. We do not own BAP, EXO, or any other band and their songs' lyrics although we wish we did. Images are credited to tumblr and their respective owners. We only own our own fictional characters and this story idea.
the
notes
-lightsaber. we're currently busy studying and having work and school but there's a new layout and better storyline because -catalyst wanted to change everything about the look of this story.
-catalyst. so i'm revamping the whole layout and rewriting every single teaser/chapter that was ever released. forget everything from the teasers and solo chapter because none of it made sense, and i'll try and pre-write chapters instead and release them at a better time. the men to the right are the ones in the government who will be involved in trying to set everything right in the world again. btw, this was last updated last Aug. 6, 2013, i believe. wow.
 
the story
The government has been watching them carefully, trying to find any type of opening to get at least one of them behind bars and into their investigation rooms. So far, they've never completely succeeded. They were becoming desperate, enlisting the help of six talented and handsome young men to counter this team of six beautiful and crafty young women. Some were trained since birth, not knowing they would have to go against their best friend in the future. Others were made to easily worm their way into their target's heart.

Who would've known that the girls would see through their plan and capture the six men instead?

However, nothing ever goes as planned. It was no surprise. They learned this the hard way after their first barely successful mission. Nobody who knew of these legendary women thought it was possible. The six men were able to use the girls' signature art against them.

Deception: one of the most powerful and beautiful arts of the world
Jung YunhoKim JaejoongWu YifanZhang Yixing
Author's Thoughts
-catalyst
{deception} relationships/friendships are going to change. kinda. forget all the past teasers/chapter - they are now irrelevant [10/23]
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rorihime #1
Chapter 1: I'm glad you're back with this story! ; w;
I was looking at my app for it yesterday and thought of you!
jadefix #2
Chapter 1: yay revamp! the sections scroll omg its amazing.
can't wait til the updates roll :)
AyoWhatUpKrease #3
Whoa I missed you ladies and this wonderfully story!
rorihime #4
Chapter 1: I missed this story. ;w;
The new layout looks interesting. :,3
baby_1004 #5
Chapter 1: Ohmergah~ the layout is so beautiful! Gahh
peachysoo #6
Chapter 8: Why didn't I notice this before? I fail hardcore, but I am here now to comment. :)

So I was pleasantly surprised to see some MYNAME in here, so seeing them in this was great. Chaejin was super cute and I liked the dynamics between the boys.

Sunli and Chaejin's relationship is so cute. It's good that Sunli is close to people and Chaejin being the adorable person that he is would have made it hard not to like him.

Oooh, there definitely seems that something is up with Yixing and I'm quite intrigued with how his part in this fic will play out. He's quite mysterious in a nonchalant way that's interesting to see. Plus, his relationship with Eunmi is interesting.

I couldn't help but laugh at Riza's 'We'll take care of this physically' because that's something she would totally say. Plus, I think you got her personality down well and her relationship with the other girls is quite interesting and realistic. :)

Mira is sassy and I enjoy that. I like how she teases everyone, except Riza that is. But it's great to see one of the girls be badass, but more of a joker in the group.

And Ahrin is such a diva... Haha, that attitude will not get her far with Riza, especially since Riza's an awkward turtle.

Eunmi's and Riza's relationship is interesting, especially since Riza's so awkward and Eunmi is such an interesting leader that it's sure to make Riza confused on occasion, but it seems to be one of Riza's better relationships with the girls. And even though Riza is quiet, Eunmi seems to understand her a bit. But Eunmi was definitely right when it came to having Riza stay back, especially with Chaejin involved.

Good start for the first chapter, can't wait to read some more from you guys.
AyoWhatUpKrease #7
Congrats to the chosen girls! The first chapter was already pretty intense... The girls all have strong personalities it seems. And is Yixing a double agent?! Lol. Or whatever. I still can't seem to figure out the sides. I'm not very bright, I suppose ._.

Excited to see more.
rorihime #8
Chapter 8: Nice start. C:
And thank you so much for using Joon, I love him. >w<

The girls do seem interesting, even though I have one or two favourites, lol.~
The newly added characters were so cute, I like the flow they're giving the story. It'd be quite boring/awkward with just the characters, I guess (like, they'd have no connection sometimes, lol). Additional charas are just needed, and seem to entertain me the most either, lol. Thanks for using extra ones! <3
baby_1004 #9
Chapter 8: Oh my gosh. I am just so happy the story started~
It was light and cute! I enjoyed reading it.
LOLs at Joon. You are right though, I can't imagine him being so serious. That goofballl! And I think MYNAME was the perfect choice! I mean Hello&Goodbye made it clear they would be perfect characters for a gang related sequence~ OH MER GAH~ Chaejin is so cute >< I'm so jelly about Sunli right now. Anyways~ The interactions with the girls and the gov so far seems so chill! What the heck could have happened? Haha. Though I'm sad no more exo-men and their ladies will show up, I'm just glad Yixing and Yeseul get to be a part of it >:3
I wish the best of luck to you unnie~ Hwaiting! <3333
jadefix #10
Chapter 1: ty and congrats to everyone who was chosen! the little character descriptions are really neat, especially with the combination of the bap boys and the exo extras. makes for one interesting character list :D
and I just reread the teasers, can't wait til the story finally starts!!
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