The Great Escape

Battle for Love (BFL) (HIATUS)

"so what's the plan" said lay

"we would have to leave after midnight so that we wont get caught" xiumin said

The boys decided they wer going to see their girls, but they need a way to get there without getting cought.

"we should leave now noone looking" says kris

"YES WERE GOING TO MEET OUR GIRLS!" said sehun very excited

"will you shut up we don't want to get caught" suho said

It took the boys one day to et to earth but it looked like it got attacked.

"what happened" luhan said

"i don't know but lets find the girls" says kai

The girls were in secret place the boys create for them. They could always go there when something bad happened.

Knock Knock

"do you think they found us" said hara

"they did once whythey again" sooyoung said

Knock Knock

"everybody get a weapon to protect yourself" jessica said

Riiinnng Riiinnng

"hara pick up your phone" says sooyoung

"hello" says hara

"hara it's me opn the door where outside" lay said

"i don't believe you prove it" says hara

Knock Knock

"look we knock open the door hara" said lay

Hara believed him and went to open the door buut got stopped.

"unnie what are doing" jiyoung said

"opening the door the boys are out there" hara said

Opening the door very slowly hara was shocked when se saw who was there.


All the credit for next couple of chapters goes to CORORO

Thank You Again!


So who do you guys think is at the door the boys or someone else

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I will try to update this story a much as i can since i have a 4 day weekend coming so if you sucribe please wait a while.

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Meredithaan
#1
Yes, i found kaizy here.. Thank you..
pegase2311
#2
Chapter 3: It's great if you can update this:)
dream_keeper88
#3
Chapter 1: Okay, the chapter length is so short. Drabbles are at least 100 words. But this isn't a drabble :)

Check out MusicChibi's Grammar Tipsy for the basics in grammar and writing :) Always check your punctuation, capitalization, spelling :)
dream_keeper88
#4
Suggestions: Don't give out the pairings in the foreword. Writers must tease the readers, to have them wanting to read more. The description should be written with that in mind :) If you can predict the story just by reading the description, why read the whole story? :)
tsekyi21 #5
Chapter 1: SunhwaxLuhan! <3 Although, I don't ship these two, they are both my biases <33
SkullMaki
#6
Suzy and Kai *O* KAIZY !! Can't wait for their moment
exohss
#7
OMG BORA AND KRIS. <3
can't wait!!!!
shiny_luna
#8
WOOOW LUNA WITH TAO
I CANT REALLY WAIT