One Day

Battle for Love (BFL) (HIATUS)

Red= Girls Thoughts

Blue= Boys Thoughts


One Day....On Earth

"Do you think that they will come visit us again?" the blonde girl said

"I don't now but I miss kai so much." suzy says

 

Suzy an her friends were out for a day of shopping. These 12 girls were normal girls until something happened to them.

 

"Maybe we can ask my mom to transport us to there planet." said sooyoung

 

WOW ARE GIRLS REALLY MISS US.

 

Same time on Planet EXO

"let's stop spying and go see them already, I really miss hara" lay said

"yeah" everyone agreed

"We can't mama would kill us if we left without permission again, and she kill them if she knew they were human." said kris

 

Do you think would obey there mama or leave there planet? OR Do you think the girls will transport to there planet to see them?

 

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Paris24
I will try to update this story a much as i can since i have a 4 day weekend coming so if you sucribe please wait a while.

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Meredithaan
#1
Yes, i found kaizy here.. Thank you..
pegase2311
#2
Chapter 3: It's great if you can update this:)
dream_keeper88
#3
Chapter 1: Okay, the chapter length is so short. Drabbles are at least 100 words. But this isn't a drabble :)

Check out MusicChibi's Grammar Tipsy for the basics in grammar and writing :) Always check your punctuation, capitalization, spelling :)
dream_keeper88
#4
Suggestions: Don't give out the pairings in the foreword. Writers must tease the readers, to have them wanting to read more. The description should be written with that in mind :) If you can predict the story just by reading the description, why read the whole story? :)
tsekyi21 #5
Chapter 1: SunhwaxLuhan! <3 Although, I don't ship these two, they are both my biases <33
SkullMaki
#6
Suzy and Kai *O* KAIZY !! Can't wait for their moment
exohss
#7
OMG BORA AND KRIS. <3
can't wait!!!!
shiny_luna
#8
WOOOW LUNA WITH TAO
I CANT REALLY WAIT