Unselfish Leader

Description

Key learns that Onew is really unselfish leader. And he learns the hard way.

Foreword

First time writing Onkey. Wish me luck
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I hope you enjoy this story. thank you for subs and comment.

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cutemonkey20
#1
Chapter 6: Ok jinki is twisted between mind and action. For god sake you might be unselfish but in terms of real feeling out of the record or stage you should be honest lee jinki. Tell jong you dont like hes doing too much skinship over kibum. If you dont try to speak our or act there wont be any change. You can behave plainly in public but be more open outside to that.

Both should start the action and less consumed by too much conflict in head ok ?

Alright I talk too much hohoho ... keep up the writing and id love to see more personal feeling each cast.

Hug !!! ♡.♡
HikariLee
#2
Chapter 6: I hate sm too for their position they have T_T so far away from each other, when they sit together in radio shows or programs they have a lot of fun together D; why sm why??? u.u

They are so different in characters but that's what they need, they are made for each other ♥
MizzPeel0007 #3
Chapter 6: Jinki's pont of view is so differnt from Kibum but yet still linked at the sme time. What is going to happen now?
zylazmi #4
Chapter 5: Hi, nice story.. Key forgot about his anger toward Onew, What a relief that is.. Hehehe.. Mad Key is funny..
cutemonkey20
#5
Chapter 5: Its just so key, angry like crazy but then forget just like that, lol ... . Come on key tell to jinki what you want to tell, dont make it complicated. Now i wonder what key will do -,-! And i want to know more about jinki's feeling. I cant really figure out here U,U.
MizzPeel0007 #6
Chapter 4: I guess shopping is the one thing that can change the path of Kibum's rath.
MizzPeel0007 #7
Chapter 3: Laughable line "is on his period of the month" I like that alot. So what is the matter with him I wonder? Really like reading them alot.
cutemonkey20
#8
Chapter 2: Last part so sweet. I imagine onew's and kibum's expression. You should include it next time. Hehe ... Just suggestion ^.^
Lookhere #9
Chapter 2: Awe I found that really cute.
"Then, that's enough for me." KYAYAHAHH
My ultimate bias is Onew and I pretty much pair him mostly with Key hahaha.